Before Its Time.

My life is made up of stories.

Stories that in other worlds would be different.

 My life is a vision of me in 20 years, my story is a version of me 20 years ago. 

Your life is one of my past experiences, and my life, I'm hoping would be yours.

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

This poem is amazing. I like the physical structure of the lines on the page, kind of a pyramid. It's interesting how you contrast 'vision' with 'version'. Our life is indeed a compilation of events or episodes. The poem is short and simple, yet provides us with things to ponder.

[Robert The Frank]

Short sweet and to the point. Very nice

[Lunny]

true... but nothing special... :P

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Short and...powerful. A little goes a long way.

[Chip]

These 4 lines are worth 4 stanzas. Well done, not many people can say so much in so little lines.

[Monica]

I love how you were able to say so much in just four lines. It makes you think, and I enjoy that about your work. Well done :)

"Your life is one of my past experiences, and my life, I'm hoping would be yours."

...Beautiful.

[Kenneth Compton]

One doesn't always have to write an epic poem like the Iliad to get the point across. You have done a fine job of providing a succinct and yet thoughtful piece in only four lines. Keep up the good work, I'll keep reading em.

[timmmmmmsardga]

I really liked this! Especially the third line!

[Kaya]

This is very short, I would love to read more of it!!! What i did read however, i definitely enjoyed.