Before Its Time.

My life is made up of stories.

Stories that in other worlds would be different.

 My life is a vision of me in 20 years, my story is a version of me 20 years ago. 

Your life is one of my past experiences, and my life, I'm hoping would be yours.

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

This poem is amazing. I like the physical structure of the lines on the page, kind of a pyramid. It's interesting how you contrast 'vision' with 'version'. Our life is indeed a compilation of events or episodes. The poem is short and simple, yet provides us with things to ponder.

[Fading Poetic]

Interesting piece. Very concise for its length with a message worth rereading several times at least. I'll be saving this to look at again when I've actually slept more than 4 hours in two days ;)

[r. f. jordan]

nice twist to the karmic regeneration within all. this is outside the usual meander, and is excellent as a result.

[Coyote Poetry]

Interesting thoughts in the poem. I like the desire of the poem. Writing can be many things. The past and the future. Hope and failure. I like the closing line in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Wild Willow Blue]

Interesting. Deep and intoxicating to the mind. Well written words; the flow is amazing even though the length is short. I am in love with the second line. Just amaze.

[lalala]

awww thts so cute. :) great write.

[Dean Kuch®]

It's true what they say. "Good things come in small packages." This was a very small but powerful write.

[marytownsend]

I love the first line, "My life is made up of stories..." This is so true and a powerful begining!

[Liderien]

this could def be expounded. I like it

[Pax]

very nice.

[Deandra Dawn]

A lot has been said with so few words. Great job.