Silent Love

How Silent love can be.

 

Love is like a silent sound

Hidden deep with in the soul

Trying to hear what it’s saying

Without letting it show

Listening to your emotions

Trying to figure them out

Trying to listen

With out any doubt

Maybe this love is real

Trying to break the silence

To show how you feel

Thinking to yourself

Can it be?

This feeling inside of me

Really be true love

Not knowing the answer

But wishing you did

Now silencing the sound of love

Having it forbid

Until it can scream

That my love isn’t a dream.

Author's Note

Just something old.

Reviews

[Kandii]

Thanks =D

[TTBoy28]

Wow! This type of love can be quite agonizing. Something kicking at you on the inside can drive you crazy. It's hard to keep forbidden love hidden. Silence will eventually be broken with a "scream." I feel you on this one!
Good Job!

[Blue]

This is great. It's really soft and simple. It's a great right with a nice melody. No rhymes, which is not bad (no rules for poetry =D), and no a thousand new paragraphs, very simple and great. Who needs all that fancy stuff anyway?

[J. Alexis Balaguer]

I loved reading this. Your rhymes are simply fantastic.
Love is almost always silent. One cannot see or hear love, rather it can be felt--and feeling is never a loud cry. It is a mellow realization.

My favorite lines:
Now silencing the sound of love
Having it forbid
Until it can scream

This is a good write. I really enjoyed reading it.
Alex