Mystic Morning

As i laid awake waiting for morning i lifted my head and pen to write for the coming day.

Morning arrives so gently,

Like your eyes.

Soft, deep, and blue.

So sweet.

All things appear lost and forgotten,

As we wake from our beautiful sleep.

Once more staring, longingly, at our divine images of reacting emotions,

That drive us from our sleep,

So peacfully on this bright cloudless morning.

People yawn and birds sing,

Today is a chance to be strong and set free,

On this bright mystic morning of love,

We share together.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

Like My Lullaby, the flow is great, and it's really soft and soothing… I don't think I've read such sweet lines that just lull me into a state of calm. Great job on that!

There are a couple of typos/spelling errors here and there, though.