Whispering Fairy

Hear those sounds in between the 

flawless energies flowing within

Hear the soft voices calling in the midst of dancing 

delicate birds hoping you now know how to fly

Hear the gentle wind of hope, blowing in the direction 

of your stormy heart... acceptance... acceptance

Hear that silence once more, for it is your guidance to it all

Hear the clapping of the fairy wings, whispering in enchanting

beats to the hearts of only those that already knew her spins.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a beautiful and enchanting piece that captures the essence of nature and the emotions that it can evoke. The imagery you use is breathtaking and transports the reader to a serene and peaceful place where they can connect with the beauty of the natural world. The way you write about the character's emotions and their acceptance of the world around them is particularly moving, and the ending is a surprising twist that adds an extra layer of depth to the poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello!
What an amazing review with as much depth as your understanding of my writing!
Truly appreciated dear 🌷
Stay well

[Relic]

Yes, silence is a big deal. Inside lie the answers if we can take the time to listen.

Great poem, Sil. :)

[Silmara McGarry]

I agree!
Thank you so much dear for reading it and your visit :-)

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read moreI agree!
Thank you so much dear for reading it and your visit :-)

See you
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[jacob erin-cilberto]

I just love the last line....this poem gives me a really good feeling...
I am dancing to it...spinning to it....
and am hearing the silence which speaks volumes.
j.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh I am happy you enjoy it dear!!! Uhuuuuu :-))))
Yes you are right about the silence ;-)read moreOhhh I am happy you enjoy it dear!!! Uhuuuuu :-))))
Yes you are right about the silence ;-)

Many thanks indeed Jacob for your lovely review, truly appreciated!

See you
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[Betty Hermelee]

Hope is a big word here…. And you can catch it from the gentle winds….silence is the path to love and freedom, it soothes our spirits…..there is energy in this forest that flows everywhere….and the fairy wings clap to a beat that softens your mind….
Best
Betty

[Silmara McGarry]

Yesss...yes
I am so glad for your visit and beautiful words, much appreciated dear Betty!
read moreYesss...yes
I am so glad for your visit and beautiful words, much appreciated dear Betty!

See you
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[Betty Hermelee]

You’re very welcome!

[Sami Khalil]

A romantic fairy tale poem with mesmerizing images. I like the idea of a stormy heart with things unanticipated blowing in all directions.
An excellent dance along and delicate poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am so happy you enjoy it, and thanks indeed for the visit! Much appreciated dear Sami :-)

See you
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[Sami Khalil]

You are most welcome Silmara.