The Butterfly Kiss

Among angels she dances, emerging and flying, 

disappearing gracefully yet no more tears to cry. 

What a fascinating creature, alluring them all,

no one can slash her wings because she knows no fall 

 

Again and again she emerges as if life has no end, 

spinning around their heads in entrancing speed. 

What more could she do since her magic is endless?

Intriguing are their thoughts as why she has been 

so restless

 

Does this being really exists or is all just a dream? 

no she has realms in different dimensions that is why 

you can't see. 

Learn to upspring above the planet so you can make 

sense of her, 

although that is impossible for the butterfly is dead.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a captivating and thought-provoking work of art that explores the concept of a mystical being that exists beyond the boundaries of our world. The way you describe the character's movements and the allure she has over others is both enchanting and mesmerizing, and the ending is a poignant reminder of the fleeting nature of life. The way you write about the character's existence in different dimensions is particularly intriguing, and it adds an extra layer of depth to the poem. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and was left feeling inspired and curious about the world beyond our own.

[Silmara McGarry]

Your review is absolutely wonderful and to the point dear! You have a very good understanding of poetry and for that I congratulate you 🌟
Many thanks indeed 🌹

[Coyote Poetry]

Artwork and words were wonderful my dear friend. I told my grandchildren. See a butterfly, make a wish. Here in Michigan. We rarely see now. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

I am indeed very thankful dear friend for reading and your sweet review. Now I will also make a wish when I see a butterfly :-)) And I hope they come back to Michigan!!! Have a great evening.
See you
Sil
:-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I saw one today dear Silmara and I made a wish. Hello from Michigan and I hope you are doing well.

[Silmara McGarry]

You did now?!!! I am truly happy for you, and I hope your wish come true !!!! I am doing great and hope you are also :-)))

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Butterflies live much too short a life. But they are beautiful. And if she just existed in a dream, it would be the best dream ever.
j.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much dear Jacob for reading and your thoughtful review.
Stay well
:-)))

[Chris Shaw]

There is something so precious and spiritual about butterflies Sil. I always think of them as being the spirits of our dearly departed. At the funeral of a close friend, a blue butterfly fluttered on to the pew and stayed next to me throughout the service. It brought comfort to me as did this beautiful poem you have penned for us. Warm wishes to you.

Chris

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey :-) I agree with you!
That butterfly new you needed the comfort dear.
Thanks indeed for reading and your great review, I am so glad you liked.
Have a beautiful weekend!!!
Hugss
Sil
:-)))

[Chris Shaw]

You too Sil. Take care :)

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

you capture the grace of the beautiful butterfly in your words. They have always been like nature's angels to me. Thank you for sharing your poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Carlos :-)
I believe they are nature angels also :-)
I am so glad you enjoy it, thank you so very much for reading and your sweet review.
Have a wonderful weekend!!!
Sil
:-)