The Butterfly Kiss

Among angels she dances, emerging and flying, 

disappearing gracefully yet no more tears to cry. 

What a fascinating creature, alluring them all,

no one can slash her wings because she knows no fall 

 

Again and again she emerges as if life has no end, 

spinning around their heads in entrancing speed. 

What more could she do since her magic is endless?

Intriguing are their thoughts as why she has been 

so restless

 

Does this being really exists or is all just a dream? 

no she has realms in different dimensions that is why 

you can't see. 

Learn to upspring above the planet so you can make 

sense of her, 

although that is impossible for the butterfly is dead.

Reviews

[Bhuyanshi Talukdar]

Your poem is a captivating and thought-provoking work of art that explores the concept of a mystical being that exists beyond the boundaries of our world. The way you describe the character's movements and the allure she has over others is both enchanting and mesmerizing, and the ending is a poignant reminder of the fleeting nature of life. The way you write about the character's existence in different dimensions is particularly intriguing, and it adds an extra layer of depth to the poem. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem and was left feeling inspired and curious about the world beyond our own.

[Silmara McGarry]

Your review is absolutely wonderful and to the point dear! You have a very good understanding of poetry and for that I congratulate you 🌟
Many thanks indeed 🌹

[Relic]

Beautifully done, Sil. "For the trumpet will sound, the dead will be raised imperishable, and we will be changed." Transformation and renewal will always be related to the butterfly. They bring good luck in dreams I hear. :)))

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello!!! Many thanks indeed for your very optimist review and truly Very well said dear poet friend!!! I heard the same ;-)
See you
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" No one can slash her wings, because she knows no fall" ... What a perfect line to describe the most alluring, beautiful, angelic creature to describe! She is beauty , happiness and freedom personified... That's why so angelic and your words decribed that so beautifully.

A very soothing, nice poem shared here... Thank you Silmara for this wonderful write

[Silmara McGarry]

I am indeed glad you enjoy it dear! And truly appreciate your review. Many, many thanks!!!
Have a wonderful weekend and stay well
:-))
Sil

[Sami Khalil]

Title, poem and pic are outstanding. Butterflies are truly what we feel about angels and you state that marvelously. They flutter around happily as if in a dance to keep us in their trance. They do it with ease and much grace as if kissing the flowers here and there.

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes, I agree, butterfliesangels....I even thought about that while writing this poem. Many, many thanks indeed dear Sami for your beautiful review :-)

Enjoy your weekend!!!

[Sami Khalil]

You too dear friend. You are welcome.

[Betty Hermelee]

An amazing poem of grace and intrigue; of life spinning around, of different dimensions; of angels, of magic; your words conjure up such ethereal images and the photos is a perfect match.
Excellent poem.
Best, Betty

[Silmara McGarry]

So kind of you Betty🌺Thank you ever so much for reading and your great review!!! Stay happy :-)))

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome!

[Vertigo Cat1111]

It was hard for me to pick a poem of yours to read, because each and every name sounded so pretty and intriguing, so you can bet I'll be back to review more! I really adored this, piece, it's just absolutely brilliant. It's so dreamily written and each rhyme is so spot on and quite catchy. Thank you so much for sharing such a gorgeous piece! I hope you're doing well and keep on writing!

[Silmara McGarry]

That is indeed very kind of you :-) If I may suggest two of my poems that maybe you would like: Surreal Love and Hopeful Children!
I am so glad you enjoy it. And no, I am the one to thank you so very much for your review and sweet words. Much appreciated dear.
Have a very pleasant weekend.
See you
:-)))
Sil

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Thank you! I will be absolutely checking those ones out!

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhhh...Can you believe that I just noticed that you already read and reviewed Surreal Love about 5 months ago :-))))) Thank you again dear!!!! I will be reading more of your work, gladly :-)))

[Vertigo Cat1111]

Haha, I completely forgot! I absolutely loved that piece! I'll still be returning to read more of your work! (:

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh so sweet🌺🌺Thanks indeed dear :-)))

[Miss Sharon]

A beautiful post that held me captive! ~Sharon

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Miss Sharon :-) So kind of you for reading and your sweet review. Thank you so much dear!!!
read moreHey Miss Sharon :-) So kind of you for reading and your sweet review. Thank you so much dear!!!
Stay well
:-)))

[Patricia Wedel]

A Butterfly is a messenger that guides our thoughts…. then emerges into the dusk where dreams are covered with wings that someday will fly away to inspire the birds and all who pray. tenderly, Pat

[Silmara McGarry]

Beautiful! Thank you so much dear Pat!
All the very best.
:-)
Sil

[Neville]

... gently does it .... what a delightful introduction to your work my friend .. I am sure to read many more ..
All Good Things,

Neville

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed dear Neville for your kind words. Then I should write more....lol
Stay happy
:-)))

[Neville]

.. You must, I will .. You too :)

[emmajoy]

Tis true, the briefer the visit the most beautiful and memorable the visitors.. and that is the brief life-span of butterflies. They suddenly arrive, dance over blossom such as wild buddleia; coy creatures. they hide if people go near them! Then, having charmed us clomping, chomping human beings, they delicately flutter 0ff and away as if colourless tissue caught in a gentle breeze. And yes, they make a simple poet turn to jelly!

Your poem echoes my feelings for butterflies'; when their season is done, seems coloured light has disappeared - albeit died. from various parts of my garden. Sigh.. Your poem is beautiful.

[Silmara McGarry]

So Great your understanding dear Emma!!! And also true, sadly they don't last very long. Thanks a million for your thoughtful review darling!
Have a pleasant night!
Hugsss
Sil
:-)))

[Davidgeo]

"what more can she do since her magic is endless".... that's a really good line

[Silmara McGarry]

I am so grateful for reading and your sweet review. Many thanks indeed Dennis, I like that line also :-)
Stay well
Sil
:-)

[Davidgeo]

It was my pleasure