Surreal Love

Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

[Silmara McGarry]

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, dear Silmara

[emmajoy]

Seems with Love everything finds its place and makes it more precious than life. Yet somehow, that life becomes something so normal it doesn't distort emotions. it makes them truer than true.

Your voice really does sing a beautiful tune here' each stanza adds dimension and colour. Each stanza is wonderfully powerful yet laid still with tender hands.. and heart.

Beautiful

[Silmara McGarry]

I am in most accordance with your words, It really makes it truer than true. I THANK YOU so very much for your amazing and so delightful review. You have me and my heart truly smiling. And with that, I must blow a kiss to your soul :-)

[Miss Sharon]

This is a beautiful write and written with style and perfection! I love it ~Sharon

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello Miss Sharon :-) ! Your words feel my heart with delight. I am so very glad you love it. It means a lot to me coming from a wonderful writer such as yourself. I also Love your writing. Thank you indeed. All the very Best. Sil

[Miss Sharon]

Always my pleasure fellow wordsmith! ~SP

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Whoa, this is very beautiful! The first stanza amazed me to know where you were going with it, "lays my love for you." But then your words continued to impress me, because it just got more and more beautiful.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am so very glad, I can actually feel your positive emotions :-) I am indeed happy to have impress you with the stanzas that followed. Thanks a million for reading it, and your wonderful review!!!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very much welcome! :)

[Lorry]

A perfectly painted picture of knowing that to love, you must first accept the love given and know it is real, only then can two hearts and minds connect to give you all you have. Only then can you truly see all the beauty that surrounds us, that somehow goes unnoticed at other times.
Superbly captured thoughts, written from a unique perspective.

[Silmara McGarry]

Perfectly well said, I couldn't agree more. All is different when seen with the eyes of love. Love your reviews. Thank you so much! ;-)

[Lorry]

You're welcome :)

[Robert Haigh]

Big imagery, describing a love as big as the universe! A poetic and uplifting write!

[Silmara McGarry]

Sometimes in my wishful thinking, I wonder what would it be if all of us could love and be loved even closely to this. Thank you so much indeed Robert, for reading and reviewing! :-)

[Neville]

Stumbling upon these words first thing this morning was an absolute delight. welcome to WC Silmara McGarry & write on......All Good Things, N

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh....Thank you so much indeed. It means so much to me. And I must thank again for the most warm welcoming! :-) Best Regards. Sil

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely.......

[Relic]

Your writing reflects not only the impenetrable bond you share but also a spiritual side to the descriptions you've gracefully painted through each stanza. Images help the reader see your thoughts, these to me are all visual artwork.

Welcome to WC.

Relic.

[Silmara McGarry]

You got it in perfection what I wanted to pass on. Beautiful words and I kindly thank youuuu! Thanks indeed for the most warm welcoming :-) Sil