Surreal Love

Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

[Silmara McGarry]

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, dear Silmara

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This felt like a song to me.. The repitition gives a special effect too! I loved reading this.. Beautifully woven ☺

[Silmara McGarry]

Really appreciated your kind words and for taking the time to read and review. Thank you so much:-)

See you

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! My pleasure ☺

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your poem really reflects the true feelings of love. love is beautiful and divine.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much, dear! Indeed, love is definitely Beautiful and Divine ;-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome. Yes it is :)

[Lydia Shutter]

What a splendiferous love poem. You weave nature and all her beauty through the affairs of the heart. You throw in a bit of spirituality. It works....and I enjoyed it. Lydi**

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh Lydia, you have me smiling :-) You got it!!!! Thanks indeed dear, I am so very glad you enjoy it.

All best my flower...
See you.. Sil ;-)

[barleygirl]

It's real easy to slip into clichés when there are a million love poems written every year. But in this case, your love poem is rich with unexpected comparisons & original-sounding ways of describing things that are familiar & relatable. I like the parallels between each couplet, starting with "between the . . . " which is one main reason your love poem sounds unique & uncommon. Rich imagery & good word choices.

[Silmara McGarry]

What a delight it is for me that you like this one, Miss Barley. I know by now that love poems are not your favorite exactly because they can at times slip into cliches ;-) So I am indeed glad with your lovely review. Also, the sincerity of your reviews are much appreciate by me, even when are tough...lol.. Thanks a million.

See you... Sil :-)

[Hi]

This is nice; a whimsical shelter for love. Thanks.

[Silmara McGarry]

I don't know how I miss your review. My apologies Matt. Thank you so much :-)

[Jamestown]

Fantastic:)
I could feel the love in these wonderful words,
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed for taking the time to read it! I am glad you enjoy it!
You B-Blessed also.
all best,
Sil :-)

[Adam Adams]

this's very good. nice.
liked the way how truly, fantastically & thought provokingly you've dripped thoughts down in such gentle words... of love. it's definitely "surreal love" that's hardly understood 'cause... it's more like season that has countless tag-lines within it. lovely. very briefly said/written!

looking forward to reading your work!

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank youuu indeed for reading it, and your SO great review! I really appreciated ;-)

I better go on writing then...lol... :-)

See you...
Sil :-)

[Vatsal Rohilla (account..]

A really well-thought piece. The repetition adds to the beauty of the poem. All the aspects of nature that you have intertwined with your feelings of love are really appreciable. Quite picturesque. Keep writing.

[Silmara McGarry]

I am very glad you enjoy it. Thanks indeed for your wonderful review! I will ;-)
All the very best Mr. Vatsal
King Regards,
Sil

[Vatsal Rohilla (account shifted)]

All the very best to you too, friend.

[Karmee]

Oh wow, I really love this write, this is really good.
Beautifully written!!

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much for reading it. I am indeed happy that you love it :-) See you. Sil

[Inject Positivity]

Adorable!!!

I think this is the on of the most passionate way of writing love poems, with pure innocence and love it rises high and high and love can reach to those places where no other powers can reach... Your poem leaves me mesmerized and I have deeply felt it's love filled voice... True love reflects it's power even when there is sunlight... Beautifully done frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you Dhiman, but adorable is your comments! I was waiting for you to read this one because I wanted to know your opinion. You understand my writing. So, I am indeed very happy you liked, my friend. :-)

Thanks a million, again!
All best, and see you. Sil