Surreal Love

Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

[Silmara McGarry]

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, dear Silmara

[Coyote Poetry]

So beautiful. The gentle and kind thoughts made the reader feel and understand. The gift of beauty and love is near always. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

i am so glad the reader can feel this :-)
I am grateful for your kind words!!
Stay well!

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome my friend.

[KCthelastboyscout]

I wrote something similar to this about the possibility of love traveling across distance, people, places and things connecting with the person you love most. What you wrote is amazing. it will stay with me for a long time.BEAUTIFUL

[Silmara McGarry]

I know, I read it and I love it! ;-)
Well then I am happy you enjoy it to the point of not forgetting. Thank you ever so much for reading and your great review! :-)

[Bare trees]

This poem is glittering with devotion. Your style is pleasing with easy going images which I like.

[Silmara McGarry]

So kind of you to read and review it, thank you so much for your wonderful words :-)

[An owl on the moon]

This is a beautiful, transcendent painting of love, pathways of joy that seem to open in every thought of your beloved. May your love only find you both in everlasting blessings.

[Silmara McGarry]

I thank you indeed Dear Craig, for your appreciable words.
Actually, this poem was not about me or a relantioship, I guess I was really inspired..lol ;-)
But love for me is much more wonderful when is like this.

See you
:-)

[An owl on the moon]

Ah, then so grateful for your inspiration! Hoping you find this kind of love always filling your life, Silmara. Take care. :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A deeply romantic write full of lovely descriptions.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you ever so much John, for your kind words :-)

[Manu]

Enchanting, beautiful and a mesmerizing write,Sil.
I love the uniqueness of this write. Very delicate and soothing piece to read :-) I could feel the warmth of that love that you are emoting to us readers. I love poems in which writers tend to use the elements of nature and existence and this is definitely one of them.
This is surely a surreal love and write :-)

[Silmara McGarry]

So very kind of you to read, and such wonderful review...Thank you very much indeed, Manu!
Really appreciated!
See you,
:-)
Sil

[Sami Khalil]

A gorgeous write to say the least. What a beautiful weaving of love, nature and the soul with the promises of light...Enjoyed...:).........

[Silmara McGarry]

I am glad indeed that you enjoy it ;-)
Thanks a million for your time and sweet words!
:-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[SZHZIA]

A beautiful imagination of all those moments that are perfec for romantic love. Though I favor spiritual love than romantic, I love your metaphors that you have used to portrayed those moments. well written poem with free verse. these line are so touching, "Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by the motion of fresh winds and one thousand innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you…"
thanks for sharing, Sil :-)

Best
szhzia

[Silmara McGarry]

I also favour spiritual love. Thank you indeed Zia, for taking the time to read and such great review.
All best,
:-)
Sil

[SZHZIA]

I am glad to hear it. It is my pleasure to read and review and you are welcome, Sil.
Best wishes
zia :-)

[Pete]

this is beautiful and heavenly. full of wonderful thoughts and imagery. great expression of faith, gratitude & glory ...

[Silmara McGarry]

Faith, gratitude & glory, YES! Many thanks indeed Pete! I am truly happy that you enjoy it.

Take care :-)
Sil

[Lovecraft]

I don't really care for the format of this poem or the references to God. No offense. ;)

But this is still damn beautiful in its imagery and word usage and the title is aptly named. The Sea is a powerfully intimate visual. 'Tis a sweet poem about the nature of love and I enjoyed it immensely.

Good job, Sil! :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Non taken ;-)

I am truly glad that you enjoy it immensely. And thanks a million for reading and taking the time to give such a lovely review!

All best :-)
Sil

[Lovecraft]

No problem, Sil. ;)