Surreal Love

Between the gracefulness of butterflies, 
and the enchanting sweet colours of 
a warm spring morning, delivered in the 
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.

Between the storms in the sky and the blue 
lights that surround the angels in heaven, 
mesmerized by the look in your eyes, 
hypnotized by my Love for you.

Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by 
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand 
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing 
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.

Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees, 
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly 
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you. 

Between the moon and earth, and stages of 
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night 
with promises of light, and the great creations 
of God, reflects my Love for you.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'

Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty

[Silmara McGarry]

No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome, dear Silmara

[Franky]

Is this written as a lovely romantic song? I'm seeing that in this. Lovely words....wonderful thoughts.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey! I have not written as a song, but it sure could be one ))) Many thanks indeed Frankie, much appreciated.
Stay well and great weekend!!!
)))

[Chris Shaw]

Hello Sil, lovely lady.

Your posted image is so uplifting and your stanzas are romantic and packed with beautiful imagery. The final line in each stanza is particularly effective. Very much enjoyed the natural environment woven into the lines of your romantic offering.

Have a great weekend Sil.

Chris

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey darling Chris :-)
Many thanks indeed my dear for your beautiful words and understanding of my writings. God Bless you!
A wonderful week to you with all the happiness!!!
Hugssss
Sil
:-)))

[lightsong]

OMG what a magnificent masterpiece my friend!!! I am so happy I stumbled into this, each verse stands alone itself, a breathtaking, a heart stolen piece, something I wish I had written, glorious and heavenly written, I highly applaud You my friend. well done ✨

[Silmara McGarry]

OHHHHH....I am ever SO happy you enjoyed my poem, truly !!! What a delight to read your special review dear friend....I am all smiles :-))))
Thank ever so much indeed and may God Bless you enormously!!!

[lightsong]

You are warmly welcome my friend :) You deserve it all, I am happy I made You smile~ Bless You enormously too💕

[Vertigo Cat1111]

This is one of my favorite poems I've read on here. Just the absolute top of the list. It's so beautiful and flows so wonderfully. It captures love, compares it to weather, colors, animals, everything beautiful and it's just an amazing poem. Sorry if I keep repeating myself, I just really adore this one and am amazed by it!

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey :-)
I am so glad you enjoyed my poem, and the ever so kind and wonderful words on it, please do not apologise at all for expressing your great reaction to it, I am flattered!
Thank you indeed ;-)))

[Insight "MH"]

Between all the love poems that I have read, this is one of the most honest, pure, and affectionate, it flows so easily and reaches the heart so effectively. Applause of respect and astonishment, MH.

[Silmara McGarry]

My appreciation MH for reading and your superb words/review. Thank you ever so much :-)

[Insight "MH"]

You are welcome!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and there might be those who would scoff at this type of writing saying it is too simple and cutsie...

my thought is opposite....i love it.
it flows wonderfully....great form...but it is also full of joy and hope that real love still exists in this world...and we need more of this feeling right now.
beautiful words.
j.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh... ;-) Thank you indeed!!!

[Vin]

LOVE IT!!!
yes such a beautifully captured poem- it is like floating in a dream.
Lots of love...

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey! Thank you ever so much!!! ;-)

[Sneh]

This is beautiful write, each word is placed in such way as they were destined to be there ...! Enjoyed your work :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Sneh :-) Thank you indeed for reading and such gracious review! Will be reading your work ;-)read moreHey Sneh :-) Thank you indeed for reading and such gracious review! Will be reading your work ;-)
Stay well
😃🌻

[Christy the Poetic Hear..]

Your words flow with grace and beauty.
Your poem is mesmerizing since the beginning.
Wonderful writing!!!

[Silmara McGarry]

Wonderful words of yours, and my absolute greatfulness for your review! Stay well ;-)

[Richard🖌]

Ohhh-MY, Dear Sil,
And, in Free Verse Quatrains … love it! : )
What a distinct honor and privilege it is to immerse mind, heart, emotions, and soul into such a moving and intricately woven expression of passion breathed out of your depths ⁓ into your fantasy lover's heart.
With genuinely unique and tenderly soothing (albeit stirring) poetic voice and deftly skilled power of stunning metaphorical imagery, combining, heaven, earth, and Nature, your ink sweeps through one's senses as smoothly and seamlessly as windblown silk undulating to the rhythms of a soft, warm summer breeze … and, beginning each verse with "Between" is a stroke of sheer genius that pulls us into every beguiling beginning, as tho' it's a romantic mystery unfolding.

Catching my breath, let me bow most graciously and gratefully in homage and thanks to you for sharing this emblematically gorgeous peek into your heart, thank you sincerely, Sil ⁓ Richard : )


Love the dreamy mood and feel of your picture choice, too!

[Silmara McGarry]

STUNNING review dear Richard, it will keep me smiling for a longggg time! God Bless indeed!
THANK YOU!!!!!