Surreal Love
A Poem by Silmara McGarry
Between the gracefulness of butterflies,
and the enchanting sweet colours of
a warm spring morning, delivered in the
most surreal dance, lays my Love for you.
Between the storms in the sky and the blue
lights that surround the angels in heaven,
mesmerized by the look in your eyes,
hypnotized by my Love for you.
Between each wave in the ocean, gripped by
the motion of fresh winds and one thousand
innocent pearls, in the hands of the singing
mermaid, breathing calmly, sails my Love for you.
Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.
Between the moon and earth, and stages of
glowing stars, twinkling up the dark night
with promises of light, and the great creations
of God, reflects my Love for you.
© 2018 Silmara McGarry
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'Between the fascinating birds in the forbidden
forest, sweeping around ancient trees,
sheltering the intense heat that flows quietly
across its glittering waters, hides my Love for you.'
Each and every one of your stanzas has a different mood and meaning - but still has to include that precious word. Is ther anything better than Love, Silmara. You create and share unique poetic beauty
Posted 1 Year Ago
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐
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1 Year Ago
You are very welcome, dear Silmara
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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5 Months Ago
Hello dear!
I am truly glad you enjoyed and certainly grateful for your kind words!
Ma.. read moreHello dear!
I am truly glad you enjoyed and certainly grateful for your kind words!
Many thanks indeed!
:-)
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Months Ago
That is indeed so very kind of you!
Many thanks and wishing you a marvelous weekend dearest P.. read moreThat is indeed so very kind of you!
Many thanks and wishing you a marvelous weekend dearest Poet friend:-)))
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6 Months Ago
My wish is the same for you.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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6 Months Ago
I am so glad you did! Thank you so much much for the visit :-)
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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7 Months Ago
Hello dear!
So kind of you to read it, thanks indeed for the sweet review also! I am certainl.. read moreHello dear!
So kind of you to read it, thanks indeed for the sweet review also! I am certainly glad you enjoyed:-)
All best
:-)))
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7 Months Ago
Yes! Keep writing.
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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10 Months Ago
I am truly glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reaching out and your lovely review �.. read moreI am truly glad you enjoyed it!
Thank you so much for reaching out and your lovely review 🌷
Blessings
:-)))
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
Much appreciated dear for reading and your superb review! Thank you so much Matthew!
Have a s.. read moreMuch appreciated dear for reading and your superb review! Thank you so much Matthew!
Have a splendid evening.
:-)
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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
No there isn't, Love is healing and cure!
Truly appreciated dearest Emma your kind words💐
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1 Year Ago
You are very welcome, dear Silmara
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
Hello dear Ken!
Many thanks indeed for your wonderful review🌹
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
Hello dear 😊
Thank you so much for your visit and lovely review 🤍
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1 Year Ago
You're most welcome! :)
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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1 Year Ago
Truly appreciated dear😊Thanks indeed for your visit 🌹
Wishing you a very pleasant weeke.. read moreTruly appreciated dear😊Thanks indeed for your visit 🌹
Wishing you a very pleasant weekend.
Hugs
Sil
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3178 Views
47 Reviews
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on September 2, 2016
Last Updated on August 24, 2018
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Silmara McGarryInstagram: @sil_mcgarry, United Kingdom
About
I often try to see the world with angels eyes...
To leave people better then I found them, even if is just with a smile...
I Love God above all...
Simple love poems are my favourite...
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