The Beautiful Song

               Look at me while I sing the beautiful song.

                Tell me that without me you can’t live on.
                Stay with me under unclouded warm sun,
                let the rays of light show you a new dawn.
                    Lay with me under glaring starry sky,
             Not ever forgetting that you will always be mine.
                         Be my knight for all my life, 
                  sharing with me unforgettable delights.
                       Soon I will be your lady in white,
           forever singing to you, the beautiful song of our lives.

Author's Note

Maybe a little too romantic and sweet for some....BUT: Why not, hum?!!! 😊😉

Reviews

[emmajoy]

There's absolutely nothing wrong with being romantic or sweet! People can be so cynical about what they call sentiment.. and fair enough to each his or her own. But surely true love and needing sweet and charming words are part of a disappearing world.. Notice this was originally added in 2016, perhaps the isolation we're all feeling now in 2021 highlights what can near enough disappear overnight. To read your beautiful words really is a remedy for sore hearts. Thank you so much for sharing Silmara.

[Silmara McGarry]

You are so right!!! No, I am the one to thank you for your beautiful words dear Emma ;-)

[emmajoy]

Lovely words and am still purring!

[Silmara McGarry]

:-)))))) Great!!!

[Lorry]

Beautifully written, your words are so light here that they lift off the page and into our hearts, leaving us with a warm fuzzy glow inside. Gorgeous.

[Silmara McGarry]

Wonderful words to my eyes :-) It makes me so happy that you enjoy it! (Lift off the page into our hearts): Beautifully putted. Thanks indeed dear!!!!

[Lorry]

You're welcome. :)

[Inject Positivity]

Ah!! This is truly romantic and feels like the angels dancing with the musical romantic vibes of the poem... Your simplicity again gives wings the reader's mind my frnd... this is so very pleasing for the heart and mind...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Silmara McGarry]

I am smiling ;-) Thank you so much dear friend for your kind words! I am always happy and thankful for your reviews. All the best. Sil