Violet Field

 

As I walk down the road with you, I take the air and breathe it in, my heart that beats perfectly when you are near me.

Am I the one to lift you up to the vast field of purple violets, where our silent minds dance together in the privacy of the magical nights?

Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine, since the beginning of our lives.

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

Purple - colour perfect for those that look both inwards and out. The colour regal yet embracing, touchable/ Your words here mean and offer truth in whatever hides within you. You have said what many could and cannot say.. tis beautiful in every way. Many, many mystic thanks.. joy within.

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello dear!
You are so right!
Much appreciated your visit and kind words!
Thank you so much!
Wishing you a marvelous weekend 🌸

[emmajoygreen]

You are oh so welcome, Silmara. Many thanks and good wishes. :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

I see the perfection in your words and loyalty in your heart for love. True love really seems like the two hearts are connected since the beginning of lives. Simply Awesome Poem :)

[Silmara McGarry]

First, I must apologise for missing your review.
I definitely agree with you!
Thank you ever so much for such sweet words.
:-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

It's okay. Your welcome :)

[barleygirl]

I like the way this starts out a little bland & then amplifies as it goes along, until the ending seems to have much more of a powerful message to convey. The first couplet seems bland to me becuz some of the ideas are a little predictable: ""walk down the road" . . . "breathe in the air" . . . "heart beats perfectly with you." This could be spiced up a bit by SHOWING us what the road looks like or what the air smells like or what the heartbeats feels like . . . details make a message more original & memorable. The final paragraph/stanza builds into a crescendo of hope & optimism.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Really appreciated ;-)

[Leigh]

I like this, you have captured a feeling and converted a mood into a colour

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed for reading and your kind review.

All best...Sil :-)

[Miss Sharon]

Oh be still my beating heart! This is so beautiful and romantic. I love all of it and purple being my fave, I love it even more! ~Shron

[Silmara McGarry]

I love your reviews, Miss Sharon! You always give me the biggest smile :-)
Thanks a million for reading, and I am so happy I got the right color to enchant you...lol... ;-)

All the very BEST darling.

See you...Sil

[Miss Sharon]

I love to see you smile my dear friend! May your days be billed with much about which to smile. ~Sharon

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so very much!!! And yours also :-) :-) :-)

[B.J]

Such a pleasant messagw for a greating card. The last stanza is heartfelt tenderness

[Silmara McGarry]

Thanks indeed for reading and you lovely review :-)

All the very best,

Sil :-)

[B.J]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[Karmee]

So hopeful, I enjoyed this write.
You write very nicely

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed, dear for your lovely review ;-)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Breathtaking read! You conveyed a strong sense of beauty and feeling that made me know how you felt. "The beginning of our lives," there's something about this expression that I adore! Tyfs!

[Silmara McGarry]

You just but a big smile on my face :-) with your review...THANK YOU!!! I am glad you adored the expression. I love this poem myself, it came out of a dream I had.
God bless you.
Sil

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

From a dream? That's amazing, it must have been beautiful. You're most welcome for the review, it's my pleasure!

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes, Beautiful indeed. Thanks again :-)

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

You're very welcome.

[Relic]

This is wonderfully done. I love the way the font almost highlights the picture. You write with a lot of emotion. Your devotional tone is also clear and pleasing.

Nice one Sil.

You might want to add a question mark at the end of the fourth sentence.

Relic :)

[Silmara McGarry]

You know, this poem came out of a dream I had.
Ohhhh... Thanks indeed for your kind wonderful words, review... and (?) thanks in a whispering :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Soft and hopeful thoughts for love.
"Give me the honour of looking into your eyes and entering your heart, where the way leads to your soul that had been connected with mine since the beginning of our lives."
I liked the above lines. When we welcome love. Love can come. Thank you Silmara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

I am indeed glad you enjoy it :-) Thank you so much for reading it and your kind lovely words. See you ;-)

[Coyote Poetry]

I did enjoy and you are welcome Silmara.

[Lorry]

Beautiful words, thoughts and sentiment, cascading off the page, into our minds. Superb.

[Silmara McGarry]

I really like the way you set your words in your reviews, very thoughtful :-) Thank you indeed.

[Lorry]

You're welcome :)