Splendid

 

And it belongs to you, the love that beats in my heart.
My soul that seeks yours, and find it every time,

for they are now one.

I am the air that you breathe, the star that guide you.
Effective fire that burns with passion.

The white eagle that flies above the sea, with the
desire to be with you.

I am your angel, your safe harboor, your peace

and contentment.

It is in each other’s hug, love and trust, that we

are elevated to paradise.

And paradise, is no less then we deserve!

 

Reviews

[emmajoygreen]

'I am the air that you breathe, the star that guide you.
Effective fire that burns with passion.

The white eagle that flies above the sea, with the
desire to be with you.'

There is such a beautiful feeling to your poem. It is a tribute to how an honest exchange of love offers what needs be given The stanzas above touched me, sent me to tissue box. Beautiful, Silmara

[Silmara McGarry]

I am truly glad you enjoyed my dearest friend 💓 Ohhh this exchange much needed in a relationship in my opinion, dear!
Wishing you a beautiful new week ahead 🍀😘

[barleygirl]

I would guess that some read this as professing earthly-type love, but I'm just too jaded to read your poem that way. To me, this feels like a more heavenly version of love, as if describing God's love or the love of some departed angel. When reading it like this, I love the way you express this heavenly love. But if I read it the other way, I'm afraid I'm just too skeptical! Thanks for understanding my limitations (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Silmara McGarry]

You are so good...Yes! Heavenly version of love :) Thanks indeed dear flower🌻 Margie :-))) HUGSSSS

[An owl on the moon]

What beautiful longings, what sacred revelations to your lover. You become all that is desired and needed to live a life of fullness, of loving, of truly splendid peace. This is what can fulfill a longing soul, to have someone to share their world with in every way.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thanks indeed for taking the time to read and your wonderful review :-)))

[lightsong]

This would be a great message for Your love, it's filled with trust and passions, energy of joy and bliss, I love this my friend.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh....thanks for reading! I am indeed happy you like it dear friend ;-) Enjoy your weekend!

[lightsong]

Enjoy Yours too :)

[Anna Moore]

Wow, Silmara, this just brought a tear to my eye. How wonderful are your words. In particular, 'the white eagle that flies above the sea with the desire to be with you;'
I'm so touched by this imagery.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh...I am indeed glad that it touched your heart.
Thank you so very much, Anna.

read moreOhhh...I am indeed glad that it touched your heart.
Thank you so very much, Anna.

All best,
:-)
Sil

[Sikandar Khan]

Paradise Of Love.........................

[Silmara McGarry]

Indeed!!!
Thank you,
:-)
Sil

[Sikandar Khan]

Wellcome Dear...

SK

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Yes it is, paradise is never lost for a true loving heart. Beautiful poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

I agree with you! Thanks indeed ;-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Your most welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A perfect way to describe the emotion of love.
"I am your angel...your safe harbour...your peace and contentment"
Love is kindness, concern and safe place to be yourself. Thank you Silmara for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

I agree with you, yes, love is a safe place to be yourself.
No, I am the one to thank you for your sweet words. All best and wonderful things for you. :-) Sil

[Coyote Poetry]

I have enjoyed your work and you are welcome.

[Gee]

Ahh, sweet. Beautifully written and would be received with the biggest smile by any lover.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh...So kind and beautiful words Gee. I hope all lovers smile then ;-) Thank you indeed!
Best Regards. Sil

[Inject Positivity]

Ah!!! How sweet this is... It kind of declares the passionate love the two lovers have for each other... Such a romantic way to write this one... You made your feelings visible to our soul's mind by presenting the poem with various beautiful natural elements... It is a joy to read when something has been written in this way... What a lovely write frnd...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you very much! Yesss...you got it!!! That is what I wanted to express not just her feelings for him but the way he feels for her and admire her feelings for him...etc...Your comment is wonderfully well putted!!! I appreciate and must thank you again :-)

Best Regards and God Bless you!
Sil