Into my Haven

 

Let me take your heart away,

there is only so much one can take.

Let me set you free even though

you think you will never be.

Let me love you so and every day

I will let you know.

Let me swim with you in the perfect lake,

and hear the pleasant sounds it makes.

Let me guide you into my haven,

where the soul doesn’t ache.

Darkness is all you see and your

dreams are so far away;
But when you arrive there with me,

you will see all the reasons to stay!

Author's Note

Haven not (heaven) is a place she created to take him with her.

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

We all need a safe haven. A special place of tranquility where we can totally relax and feel at ease. This is a beautiful love poem for someone who is surrounded by darkness. Let me she says. Yes, she wants to alleviate the negatives and entice him to a place where he feels spiritually lighter. Nice work Sil. Hope your day is going well.

Chris

[Silmara McGarry]

You got it perfectly!!! All smiles :-)))) Thanks indeed flower for reading and your sweet review. My day is great, today I manage to close the door on sometime that was bothering me for the last 10 days. So... relief :-)))
Stay well and Hugsss. Sil

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome :)

[Sikandar Khan]

Oh Your Writings Are Full Of RomanTic Poetry .....

[Silmara McGarry]

Yes, you are right, most of my work is.
And it is my wish that romantic poetry could conquer at least 40% of the humans hearts...earth would be a much better place it that happen.. LOL..

Thanks indeed!
:-)

[Sikandar Khan]

Oh You HAve Great Wish MAy God COmplete Your Wish

[Lorry]

A perfect description of what we all need and strive to find, a place safe from the chaos of the outside world, where only peace and calm reside. Beautiful words.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh...so true! Thanks indeed Nemo, for taking the time to read and review.

See you...

[Lorry]

You're welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Hopeful and beautiful for love and concern.
"Darkness is all you see and your dreams are so far away;
But when you arrive there with me you will see all the reasons to stay."
Sometimes we need someone to show us the light and joy of being alive. Thank you Simara for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed for reading it, and your lovely review! :-)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Miss Sharon]

OH BE STILL MY BEATING HEART! THIS IS BEAUTIFUL AND SO VERY ROMANTIC.I LOVE IT. ~SHARON

[Silmara McGarry]

You have me smiling right at the first word :-) I love your reviews, and I am always happy when you like my work.Thanks a million Miss Sharon.
God bless you!

[Miss Sharon]

You are SO welcome my dear. It is always my pleasure. ~Sharon P.S. And God HAS blessed me beyond belief in my lifetime. HE is awesome! ~SP

[Neville]

We all need a haven dont we & that lake you describe sounds so compelling, I almost want to dive in...

[Silmara McGarry]

I also think we do. I am glad your mind was into it. Thanks indeed!!!

[samparks,sam]

some thing sudden touch with heart in life. I can feel so. I face once this situation. your poem so nice . I appreciate your feelings through your poem

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much!

[Inject Positivity]

Priceless!!!

It has been written in a simple yet pleasing way that shows the gentle care the poet wants to give to her beloved... To give someone a place to live that is covered with love is more beautiful than any gift anyone can ever give... It's a peace building write with a beautiful touching message of love...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Silmara McGarry]

You got it again :-) Thanks indeed! I agree with you, that is for sure the most perfect gift! I am so greatfull!

All the Best,
Sil

[Schatzi]

Hello Silmara McGarry,

I really enjoyed your poem. It was a beautiful topic and worded so well.

Thank you for sharing!

Kind regards,

Schatzi

[Silmara McGarry]

Hello Schatzi!

So kind of you!Thank you so much, it means a lot to me!
Best Regards to you!
Sil