*YOU*

You are like diamonds of golden light,

Always shining so bright.

You are fresh breath of a new life,

In a world so tight.

You are sweet everlasting love

one can hope to find,

In days where love means no

more than blind selfishness of life,

You are the peaceful mountain

where my body lay down at peace

together with the happiness of my mind.

 

Reviews

[SZHZIA]

Another lovely poem with great imagination of beloved for the lover. I love the metaphors that you have used in the poem and also the rhymes. Every line is touching to a reader's heart. a beautiful love poem in short and few words. I enjoy it. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.

Best
szhzia

[Silmara McGarry]

Much appreciated truly! Thanks a million, Zia ;-)
Take care.
:-)
Sil

[SZHZIA]

It is my pleasure and you are welcome as always. ;-) zia

[Mark Hart]

This is pleasant. In its simplicity you don't feel it's strength until the end. A very lovely love poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thanks indeed 🌹🌹🌹😊

[Franky]

This is a beautiful write. You just have a heart of gold. Well done!

[Silmara McGarry]

Hey Frankie ))) So very kind of you, Many, many thanks indeed dear poet.
Stay well
:-)))

[Franky]

This is just a beautiful write with an appropriate photo too. Very nice

[Silmara McGarry]

Many thanks indeed dear Frankie!

[emmajoy]

' You are the peaceful mountain - where my body lay down at peace - together with the happiness of my mind. '

Your words are like honey slowly and carefully dripped on a beautiful plate or saucer. So much to look at plus, the occasional tip of a finger dancing on its golden surface - beautiful. Many thank yous for sighing me thoughtful! x

[Silmara McGarry]

🙂 Beautiful words and such lovely review dear Emma!!! These was one of my first poems...lol...read more🙂 Beautiful words and such lovely review dear Emma!!! These was one of my first poems...lol...
I am the one to thank you so muchhhh!!!
Hugsssss
Sil
🌻

[Peter]

Nice touch, simple and elegant,
You speak from a heart that is obviously in love.
its is becoming a lost art showing and speaking of love
music today does not talk about love, just lust.
movies don't show love, Just skin and acts of quick satisfaction.
Very nice poem.

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhh...Thanks indeed for your time and wonderful review, Peter!

[horizon]

That is very refreshing poetry..with rhyming..really meaningful...very nice...

[Silmara McGarry]

So nice of you to take the time to read, and such sweet review. Many thanks indeed :-)))))

[horizon]

My pleasure dear

[Relic]

To compare someone in such a way shows great love. Nice poem Sil.

[Silmara McGarry]

Indeed ;-) Thank you so much!!!

[Fran Marie]

A beautifully written puece here..lifting love up to a higher realm.

.nicely done

[Silmara McGarry]

So kind of you for reading, Fran :-) Many thanks for the sweet review!

[lightsong]

Oh! I so dearly love this! because it rises to that spiritual love that not all can feel it, beautiful images, the first one captured the eyes along the photo, Your style is that simple wonderful one that all can enjoy reading!

[Silmara McGarry]

So kind of you to read and such sweet review. Many thanks indeed...What a beautiful name *Light*

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Beautiful love poem. I enjoyed the entirety and strangely I took something more spiritual away in meaning.

[Silmara McGarry]

Thank you so much! I can understand perfectly what you mean about the spiritual feeling...God :-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

In days where love means no more than the selfishness of life; wish days like those should never end from anyone's life. Wonderful prose :)

[Silmara McGarry]

Ohhhh... Thank you so very much!!!!!!! :-)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome so very much friend :)