Loneliness

Being Alone
Is Very Difficult
It Can Make Anybody
Feel He Is Nothing
He Has No One
Who Can Listen To Him
With Whom He Can Talk
Who Can Care For Him
Loneliness Also Can Make
Person Mentally Disturb
Loneliness Also Made
Some Peoples Wild Monsters
But Being With Dishonest
And Feelingless Peoples
Is Worse Than Being Alone

Reviews

[Samuel Dickens]

And so it is. You speak wisely. In our desperation to find friends, it is all too easy to choose the wrong ones and be led down a destructive road. If only we could be happy and satisfied with our own companionship long enough for the right kind of friends to come by.

[DoormanDan]

Good description of loneliness. Having lived through a period of time where I was rather alone, I can relate with it. Keep up the writing. You put things into words very effectively.

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks for your valuable words

[Eternity]

Hi (: are you friends with Usman Ghani? You look like a Pakistani kid I talked with a few years. Except the beard now!
Yep, Loneliness can hurt. I like the extremes you write: Wild Monsters. Person Mentally Disturb(Ed).
It's difficult to find true caring on a machine.
Great thought provoking item!

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks for your encouraging review!

[Eternity]

(: You're welcome

[olla]

whew.. it took me awhile to find one I could read..

it is a terrible thing to be with someone and still be lonely..

[Sikandar Khan]

i am happy that you got your cup of tea...

[olla]

it was a language problem.. I am mono literate.. but i am glad I was able to find that you are not.. it was well worth the effort.. thank you..

[Sikandar Khan]

welcome dear

[BlackPrince]

You are absolutely right about the sadness of loneliness. You imply here that we all need people in our lives to feel loved and needed. Yet you balance it by truthfully pointing out that though we need others in our lives to combat loneliness, we also must be aware that
'Some people are wild monsters.
And being with dishonest
and feeling-less people
is worse than being alone'.

It's true, we must be positive ourselves and surround ourselves with positive people. It's no good being friends with a thousand demons when you can have only one angel as true friend.

WELL DONE

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Your Bundle Of Sweet Words.........

[A Soap Mess Stories]

Amen. I'd much rather be lonely than be with dishonest, heartless people. Excellent poem.

[Sikandar Khan]

Yeah Your Are Right And Thanks For Appreciation Mam....

[Priyanshi]

Loneliness is much better than being with dishonest and heartless people..... they curbs one....
The exactly true feeling you wrote which is a somewhere relatable friend:))
And sorry for late review SK....
was busy these days ...so didn't open the read request folder

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Your Late review...Hehehehe

[AYVID N]

I totally agree with you. So well said!

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks For Appreciation......

[JDAwesomeness]

This is amazing! Once again it feels like you are writing about my life! You are amazing at relating to everyone!

[Sikandar Khan]

Thanks Again For Appreciating My Work...

[barleygirl]

Your statement is true & easy to relate to! I like your straightforward style, explaining how it feels in everyday terms, & then ending this with a slightly different observation which is even more true. There are many ways that being alone can be enjoyable . . . many furry & feathered friends out there . . . better than putting up with a hurtful friend! *smile* Fondly, Margie

[Sikandar Khan]

Yeah Thanks For Appreciating My Work And Style
Moreover Your Review Is Also Exciting One!