Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday

A Poem by Sikandar Khan
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For Peach

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Ahm Ahm
How Are You?
I Hope You Are Doing Well
Was Waiting Eagerly
To Wish You
On Your 22th Birthday
Oh Sorry 21th According To NIC
Want To Wish You First
On This Happiest + Boring Occasion
May God Gives You More Happiness
I Saw You Are So Strong As Woman
May God Make You More Stronger
Hope You Recover Well
I know You Are So Ill
And You Are Admitted In Mental Hospital
For 2 Years
Doctors Also Gone Mad While Treating You
Now You Are Doctor And Your Doctors Are Your Patients
Sometimes How You Think Without Brain?Because You Are Girls
And Girls Dont Have Brain
Is There Special Power?
Or Its Power Of Mentallity
By The Way Happy Birthday
Your One Year of Life has Been  Reduced
Or I Want To Say Something Special
About Relationship
God Has Not Made You My Sister According To World System
But God Has Made You My Sweet And Elder Sister By Heart
And I Never Want To Part Away With You
You Are So Helping
This Birthday I Want Gift From You
I Want you To Treat Me As Real Brother
And I Have Hurt You In Past For Any Reason
Sorry For That But I Dont Want To Do It
It Just Happpened Accidnetly Due To My Mentallity And Anger
Again Sorry For Thiss
Hope You Give Me Gift I Demanded
Happy Birthday To You Sister
I Am Writing This
Not To Impress
Just To Express.....

© 2017 Sikandar Khan


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What makes your message interesting & unique is the way you include many real-life details that help us see & understand & feel the situation between you & your sister. I'm not sure how to interpret this line: "girls don't have brain" (seems offensive to me, to put women down, in my USA culture, but maybe things are thought of differently for your culture?) All in all, the reader can feel the caring affection you feel for your sister thru-out.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sikandar Khan

7 Years Ago

Thanks For Appreciation Mam.......Girls Dont Have Brains I Use This Line Just To Tease My Sister...... read more



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Only you could say that girls dont have brains Sikandar and get away with it because it is clearly a little joke to your sister - nicely penned Sir.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sikandar Khan

7 Years Ago

Thanks Sir...Yeah I Try To Put Smile On Her Face So I Try To Wish Her In Humorous Manner....
Girls don't have brain...?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

It is sweet actually, the way brothers be with sisters sometimes, they tease they fight. While I rea.. read more
Sikandar Khan

7 Years Ago

oh Thanks...
Najam Us Saher

7 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Added on October 1, 2017
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Sikandar Khan
Sikandar Khan

Lahore, Islam, Pakistan



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