Madam Madam Open The Door Madam How are you Madam? Madam Please Open The Door.. Heavy Rain Outside Please Open The Door Lights Thundering Madam Please Open The Door There is So Much Cold Please Open The Door
Thanks Madam Oh Madam Why are you screaming ? Why are you crying? I am not bad guy Dont Cry My Face is Ugly But I am innocent Dont Worry Madam Why you crying?Help..Help.. Listen Dont cry I am not Dracula I am Just a Innocent Passenger Searching For My Dinner Stop Crying Madam And Sit Down
Goood Madam Thanks For Tea But I dont like Tea Dont Worry Madam Help Me Madam I am Hungry for 5 days I am searching for my food
No Thanks For Potato Chips Madam I dont like vegetables Madam Help Me Finally I got my food but need your help No No I am not asking for Money I just Need Your Help Madam Please Close Windows Lot of cold coming from Open Windows
Thanks Madam Madam I Am Not Dracula
Dont Be Afarid
I am just Innocent D.....
D..... Come Sit Near Me Listen Me Carefully Put Your Fingers On Your Lips See Into My Blue Eyes Dont Afraid of My Dangerous Face Because I am Innocent
Ohh Madam You Are So Beautiful Your Black Eyes Your Brown Hair Your Sweet Lips Cute Face Slim Body
Oh Electricity Gone Dont Worry Madam I Have Flashlight Madam Again See Into My Eyes Put Your Finger On Your Lips Then Listen Me Carefully I dont want any Noise
Soo I want Your Help I am Hungry For 5 Days I searched for My Food Finally I Got it You Want to know About My Food Say Yes
Ohhh You So Exciting Okk Listen Dont Move Your Eyes Put Your Finger Tightly On Your Lips I dont want any Noise
You Are My Food Madam Dont Move Listen Me My Speech Is Not Over Listen Me I have hammer If u make any noise I will hit your head with it I have a knife Come Near Me I want to see your attractive neck Want To Kiss On Your Neck Come Near Me Madam Dont try to Make Noise Ohhh Intelligent Girl
Oh Your Neck is So Sweet You are also so Sweet Madam But Sorry Madam As I earlier Said I am hungry
Sorry Madam Oh You Feeling Pain Yeah You Are Feeling Pain Knife Was Sharp Ohh Blood Neck Full Of Blood Sorry Madam
Dont Move Madam I also Have a Hammer Stop Moving Goood
You Intelligent Oh Its Dinner Time Dont Disturb Me
Ohh That Was Delicious So Sweet Taste Of Your Blood More Sweet Than Your Lips
Thanks For Dinner Ohh You Sleeping May You Not Awake Again Nice To Meet You Madam Oh I forgot to Ask Your Name Very Bad By The Way
My Name is Devil
And I am Innocent
As You Know
Ohh Madam Dont Cry Open Your Eyes Its Just Your NightMare Dont Worry Madam.......
Well, well.. I never knew this side of you.
Looks like you are not that innocent after all :P
Hehe.. Anyway, good work!
It's really nice to see you trying different styles.
And you are improving :)
Keep writing!
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thanks My Stupid Friend For Your Different Review.....
This is awesome....
At the start, I hadn't expected the end to be this way...
The whole poem is one side and the last parah just pushes it all back...
I am impressed at the style you maintained here... keep it up... u r doing really well!!
Thumbs up!!👍👍
Anindita
I like how you took a well-known phrase and built a story around it's literal meaning.
The constant reassuring and politness is a nice touch - its unsettling and gives a real sense of deviousness.
I liked this horror write Sikandar.
Cool!
I am always impressed with anybody who choses to write in their second language. I can barely squeak out a sentence in Spanish and yet here you are writing a full piece in English. It truly is impressive.
That being said, this is not a screenplay. If I were to classify it I would say that it is a free verse poem. The first step to a good work of writing is knowing what it is, and what direction you want to go with it. Luckily, I think this works much better as a poem anyway, especially with the twist at the end; it was just a dream.