Madam Madam Open The Door Madam How are you Madam? Madam Please Open The Door.. Heavy Rain Outside Please Open The Door Lights Thundering Madam Please Open The Door There is So Much Cold Please Open The Door
Thanks Madam Oh Madam Why are you screaming ? Why are you crying? I am not bad guy Dont Cry My Face is Ugly But I am innocent Dont Worry Madam Why you crying?Help..Help.. Listen Dont cry I am not Dracula I am Just a Innocent Passenger Searching For My Dinner Stop Crying Madam And Sit Down
Goood Madam Thanks For Tea But I dont like Tea Dont Worry Madam Help Me Madam I am Hungry for 5 days I am searching for my food
No Thanks For Potato Chips Madam I dont like vegetables Madam Help Me Finally I got my food but need your help No No I am not asking for Money I just Need Your Help Madam Please Close Windows Lot of cold coming from Open Windows
Thanks Madam Madam I Am Not Dracula
Dont Be Afarid
I am just Innocent D.....
D..... Come Sit Near Me Listen Me Carefully Put Your Fingers On Your Lips See Into My Blue Eyes Dont Afraid of My Dangerous Face Because I am Innocent
Ohh Madam You Are So Beautiful Your Black Eyes Your Brown Hair Your Sweet Lips Cute Face Slim Body
Oh Electricity Gone Dont Worry Madam I Have Flashlight Madam Again See Into My Eyes Put Your Finger On Your Lips Then Listen Me Carefully I dont want any Noise
Soo I want Your Help I am Hungry For 5 Days I searched for My Food Finally I Got it You Want to know About My Food Say Yes
Ohhh You So Exciting Okk Listen Dont Move Your Eyes Put Your Finger Tightly On Your Lips I dont want any Noise
You Are My Food Madam Dont Move Listen Me My Speech Is Not Over Listen Me I have hammer If u make any noise I will hit your head with it I have a knife Come Near Me I want to see your attractive neck Want To Kiss On Your Neck Come Near Me Madam Dont try to Make Noise Ohhh Intelligent Girl
Oh Your Neck is So Sweet You are also so Sweet Madam But Sorry Madam As I earlier Said I am hungry
Sorry Madam Oh You Feeling Pain Yeah You Are Feeling Pain Knife Was Sharp Ohh Blood Neck Full Of Blood Sorry Madam
Dont Move Madam I also Have a Hammer Stop Moving Goood
You Intelligent Oh Its Dinner Time Dont Disturb Me
Ohh That Was Delicious So Sweet Taste Of Your Blood More Sweet Than Your Lips
Thanks For Dinner Ohh You Sleeping May You Not Awake Again Nice To Meet You Madam Oh I forgot to Ask Your Name Very Bad By The Way
My Name is Devil
And I am Innocent
As You Know
Ohh Madam Dont Cry Open Your Eyes Its Just Your NightMare Dont Worry Madam.......
Really an amazing piece.
Even it is unique...I 've never read so interesting piece...really it's best work of your....Thanks for sharing so brilliant piece.
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First paragraph there should be a coma first line, than fourth line there should be a coma
Second paragraph second sentence there should be a coma after Madam, than I am not bad guy should be I am not a bad guy, Than I am just a innocent passenger should be I am just an innocent passenger
Third paragraph thanks for the tea, but I don’t like tea. Than I’ve been hungry for five days
Fourth paragraph No, thanks for the potato chips Madam. Madam, Help me. Finally, I got my food but I need your help. No I am not asking for money. Please close your windows
Fifth paragraph Madam, I am not Dracula.
Sixth paragraph Listen to me carefully. Don’t be afraid of my dangerous face
Eight paragraph. Don’t worry Madam I have a flashlight. Then listen to me carefully
Ninth paragraph I’ve been hungry for 5 days
Tenth paragraph Ohhh you are so exciting. Ok listen.
Eleventh paragraph don’t move. Listen to me. I have a hammer
12th paragraph I want to kiss your neck.
15th paragraph you’re intelligent
Last paragraph it’s just a nightmare.
Good piece overall, it kept me sitting at the edge of my seating, trying to guess what was going to happen
A glance inside the head of a misunderstood human, some might call him a psychopath, some might call him crazy...but the madam didn't, and perhaps that's what led to her demise.
However, looking past the fact that this is a stage play, I like to think metaphorically (like the poetry nerd I am), and I like to play with the thought that the passenger represents the human race, and the madame represents joy and peace, but that our greed leads us to destroying the very thing keeping us alive....
Only thing I know, is that I really enjoyed this writing, best read I'll get today.