The Accompanists

Deep breaths are inhaled, a few heartbeats skipped, before he starts again.

Please visit the following site to read it. I'd really appreciate your reviews. http://www.alicialoh.com/2011/03/accompanists.html

Author's Note

Reviews here are welcome, but I'd prefer comments on the link instead. :)

Reviews

[Lydia]

I'm litterally tearing up right now. That was amazing, and so beautiful. It was like you could feel the pain the characters were feeling.

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow this is really good! i love this :) mind checking out some of my work?

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Interesting...

[Cynthia]

I love this story much, sorry for the late read, but I gotta say, your story is fantastic! I understand you prefer comments on the link, so well, I'll do that later :)
Anyways,
Nice written!

[Fenner]

Great story. It flowed really well and you perfectly touched on what we all fear the most, losing someone we love. Just really well written. Keep it up. :)

[Fontane Wong]

I like this amazing story! Thanks for sharing such a fantastic story. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

The story is amazing. Thank you for sharing your powerful story.
Coyote

[Linear]

Shared :O)