Please Come Back

I never felt like I was just another girl

With an imperfect part of me I needed to hide;

Not when you were around.

You listened when I needed someone,

Reassured me that everything would be okay.

When they did turn out fine,

You’d always be right there to say

See, I told you so.

Then we stopped talking;

Mere worlds would simply state that we drifted apart,

But it was to be more than that, because time in itself

Couldn’t have torn us into different directions.

And yet the unforgiving wall of time stands between us,

The creator of which I know not the name of.

It promises to keep us in separate worlds

‘Til we remember each other’s names no more.

Conversations arise with the blue moon,

Subjects so meager it’s impossible to know

That it’s you I’m talking to.

So unlike those heartfelt conversations

I used to look forward to having.

Now I need you more than ever,

Because you’re the only one who could understand.

But I’m too afraid to breach this silence;

Afraid that our dismal drift apart will turn bitter,

Punctuated by more things I would’ve told you.

I miss you… Please come back?

Author's Note

Wrote this quite a while ago… This is one of those poems that I said I couldn't stop editing. Now this phrase has pass, and I think that this poem is ready to be posted. I had another analogy I wanted to include, but it somehow fell out of its place. The last line came to me first.

Reviews

[Cynthia]

Yes! Your Poem is always relateble! Very deep emotion inside the poem, I love the feeling I have when I read you poems! I agree with Paperhearts, it reflects out the teens feeling. Your words in your poem are very beautiful, liek always.
Nice Written!

[MoriartyMesa]

I am still learning about what some poems are and what some actually are. As far as meaning and emotion, and i liked this. Made me, feel.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice reviewing and desire of those days come again...........

[Cherry Lai^_^♥~~]

Inpire me...

[deeps]

Such an aemotional write
written so lovely!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Another great write on a beautiful love poem!

[Dalebear]

Nice poem I like it

[Hannah]

I liked it although some of the wording did confuse me, maybe its that I read it wrong the first time and I'm a bit sick at the moment haha. It was very heartfelt though,good job :)

[Linear]

So so very sad, a girl i once knew wrote two poems like this asking me to come back, i did then she left me, tore my heart apart, your poem made me cry, but it so reminds me of her, im going to place it in my favorites.

It's sad but beautiful all at the same time, it has come from your heart and it's written in blood

[PaperHearts]

Aww, I love the fact that everything you write is so relatable, and is a real reflection of the roller coaster of emotions that teenagers go through as they grow up and discover love. The wording of this piece was beautiful, particularly towards the end, and the last line certainly hit a raw nerve. A great write,
~PaperHearts