Bleed

You tore my heart out,

Threw it to the ground

And shredded it into pieces.

 

Left me bleeding

My heart empty and

Without you.

 

You left me to bleed

To bleed ‘til my death.

 

And yet you didn’t know it

So how it happened,

Neither of us will ever know.

 

An apology would have been appreciated,

Would have.

But now, ‘sorry’ won’t make any difference.

 

For the wound has long been healed,

The blood I shed has been regenerated,

And I’ve found someone else,

Someone who’ll never leave me bleeding.

Author's Note

The title 'bleed' just stuck itself at me, so I had to write a poem to go with it... I really hope you like it!!

Reviews

[Dalebear]

Sad poem with emotion but hope at the end of it. Good write

[Wondering Mind]

The title drew me to the write. Sad yet ends with new hope.

[cecil]

I agree the title is excellent for the words and feelings conveyed witin these stanzas, a flowing piece which delivers the emotions that i am sure were horrible at least to feel,,losing any love no matter how great or smal is a painful ride,,,Blessings..Cecil

[*Evelen*]

Wow this is a very good poem. Heart break is a horrible thing, but it's not so bad when you have someone there to help you put the pieces back together. I liked the end the best. Good job.

[*~Kristy~*]

I LOVE IT! I know this feeling perfectly except, sadly, the guy from before that ripped me apart came back to me...And now, I'm so afraid of leaving him that it's...Awful. It's bad to live in fear of heartache. To have those memories following me everywhere I go... Anyways, enough about me!!!
This was a really great poem! The title matched well too!!! Our pictures are similar too, lol!
KEEP WRITING!

The title works really well with this piece.
I love it, the end is so positive, so screw them lol.
Great flow and rhythm.
-Nice Write-
-Satan's Toaster

[Lilly]

I think the title works with the poem. really great emotion in this - yes I like it :)