Prolouge: The Bloodmoon Pact

special thanks to Rainy who gave me an idea for the Characters. I will be writing more soon. I am hoping to turn this into a full out anime style show and I'm looking for other's reviews.

...As the moon glow turned red, two ancient warriors stood in a lone grassy plane. Though they were brothers they were rivals from the start. Sigmus Wolfe, the older of the two held a gleaming black bladed ninjato with glowing blue runes named Soulbane. his glowing light blue eyes burned with a literal fire behind them as he spoke, his trench coat's hood covered his face making it impossible for his brother to see his expression. he pointed the glowing sword at his brother his thin armored gauntlets creaked along the handle. "You know what you have done Eric! Don't dare to deny it! You wanted this war, and now our father has sent me to kill you!"

The other only laughed, "how long have you been father's slave? his puppet?" he looked at the power that coiled around his arm giving off the aura of a god, "Funny, we used to be mortal once. Remember?  oh what wonderful gifts were given to us... and I'm not going to let you ruin my fun Lotukai!"

Sigmus grinned swishing the blade, "then draw your weapon and we'll se who's the better fighter is then."

in a swift movement, Eric drew his blade charging. Sigmus brought his blade up to parry then bashed him in the face with an armored hand. his other grinned then went to strike again. Sigmus, in a swift stroke, brought up his sword impaling his brother through the heart. Eric gasped, "I'm sorry... brother."

"I know. It's for the best."

then a thick black blade not unlike Sigmus's except runed red erupted from Sigmus's chest. "You're right. it is."

Sigmus dropped to the ground. and with his dying breath cursed the earth below him, "I shall be reborn. if not in this life then the next I swear on Orvis I kill you! may the peoples of this land jeer your name and pillage your temples for you have cursed death in this mortal world. may the demons and dead rise and take place what was once mine! for I am Lotukai God of death and destruction!

then the red blade fell. killing off the god of death. "I know son."

Author's Note

this is just the prologue. mind you chapter 1 will start soon. im going to be turning this into an American anime If anyone thinks it would be a good idea

Reviews

[The Exiled Wolf]

This is a good start! I'm just a little bit confused though... do both of them died? I can't wait to read the next chapter!

[Aaron Wolfe]

yes both died but the curse that the one made at the end plays a significant role in the story.
read moreyes both died but the curse that the one made at the end plays a significant role in the story.

[wolf5252]

pretty good, seems strange but i cant wait to see more.

[AegonTar]

MOREEE......pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

[Aaron Wolfe]

this is only the prologue introducing the gods in the story the main character hasn't come in yet

[AegonTar]

Can't help it you got me hooked

[skyler]

hey is it finished yet i couldnt tell.

[Aaron Wolfe]

no I don't have any time to write more today but I will be continuing it tomorrow

[skyler]

i was being sarcastic

[Aaron Wolfe]

cool cool.

[skyler]

cool cool cool

[Aaron Wolfe]

don't ruin my trademark line bruh

[skyler]

to late i already did