Of moments, thoughts and actions

my first (somewhat) rhyming poem

Moments spent in thought,

A solitary world inside my mind.

Infinite possibilities and dreams are caught

Reality strikes,

dreams are weighed against humanities flaws,

suddenly the amazing world falls to shreds,

each dream, each possibility, falls through the floors

life is examined,

people observed,

pointless it seems,

is it deserved?

A man stands out,

his purpose found,

moments treasured to become more profound

moments spent in thought,

and a realization of thoughts turned to action

so infinite possibilities and dreams can be caught  

Reviews

[JanieB]

I like this. The rhyming is good.

[No regret]

very nice rite .....
Reality strikes,
dreams are weighed against humanities flaws,
suddenly the amazing world falls to shreds,
each dream, each possibility, falls through the floor..

loved these words . Gratifying .

[Sweets]

This is good :)
Great rhymes :)
You can find more rhyming words at www.merriam-webster.com
Just type in the word, you'll find the synonym and antonym and the rhymes :)
Good luck!