serenity

I sit serenely

under the calm gray sky.

It's simple elegance

making light of all my

worries and regrets.

And slowly as the

soft, light rain begins to fall,

i fondly remember

good times of old...

Truly, it is a beautiful mood,

each raindrop filled with peace,

a treasured moment,

as I feel the cool wet drops

across my face

all stress relieved,

and I feel,

what it means

to be alive

Author's Note

something more positive :D

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

Nature does have a way of bringing peace, as does your poem. Very well done.

[Jennifer Elizabeth]

excellent read. loved the flow, imagery and the feeling that it left me with. thanks for sharing

[Ruth]

What a moment!
Great work love, a moment of clarity seldom gained!
xx

[KAREN]

Positive it is! Sat back close your eyes and think of this poem and feel the peace and happiness!!

[RJM]

loved it. a refreshingly good poem after a f*****g long day. Great work!

[pamzilla. &hear..]

I loved it.
You should do more positive poems.
:)

[JanieB]

I love it. Well done.