a stranger's voice

a stranger's voice

A Poem by Joshua Smit

a strangers voice,
heard softly through the wind,
a call for help, a cry,
for someone who cares...
a strangers voice,
heard softly through the wind.

a call for help, a cry,
for someone who cares
a strangers voice,
heard softly through the wind.

His only answer,
is the echoed cry.
a call for help, a cry,
for someone who cares.

he cries out once more,
his desperate plea,
but all he hears, are the echoes
of his desperate needs.

A strangers voice,
heard softly through the wind.
his only answers, the echoed cries.
a question, the answer,
the answer, a question?
does he not see,
the answer to his question,
is in his answer to the other's cries

© 2010 Joshua Smit


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Oh yes a stranger cries out in darkest night, who hears his plea, who close their ears to echo's cry

Great poem throughout

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I adore the echo effect within the piece and the message behind it...excellent work...100% from me.

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. wow ... simple, profound and extremely poetic ...


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Added on November 15, 2010
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Joshua Smit
Joshua Smit

Johannesburg, gauteng, South Africa



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