a stranger's voice

a strangers voice,

heard softly through the wind,

a call for help, a cry,

for someone who cares...

a strangers voice,

heard softly through the wind.

a call for help, a cry,

for someone who cares

a strangers voice,

heard softly through the wind.

His only answer,

is the echoed cry.

a call for help, a cry,

for someone who cares.

he cries out once more,

his desperate plea,

but all he hears, are the echoes

of his desperate needs.

A strangers voice,

heard softly through the wind.

his only answers, the echoed cries.

a question, the answer,

the answer, a question?

does he not see,

the answer to his question,

is in his answer to the other's cries

Reviews

[J.Lynne958]

This poem is haunting, thought provoking, and profound. Good work.

I love how you repeat the idea many times. It sends a very powerful message and it shows how a lot of people feel. Great job.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Love it! Awesome!

[Heather D]

this poem gave me chills! it's beautifully written and portrays a lot of emotion to the reader! i loved it!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great poem! The ending is the person answering is on cry? is that the answer to his question! loved the way it sounded!

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this builds to an amazing ending..thoughtful and very interesting..loved the ending..

[pamzilla. &hear..]

I loved this :)

[JanieB]

Well done.

[flowers_roses]

good writing keep going! :D

[Sweets]

This is good :)
But the ending kinda confused me D=
Great write! :D