A Thought

I think...
That deep perception and insight
can be corrupted by
an imbalance of
selflessness and selfishness...
And since you keep you're thoughts to yourself
Nobody knows your true perception and insight
because you kept it hidden.
But now that it's gone,
you're the only one who realizes it's not there anymore.
Everyone only sees
your newfound
Corruption.

Reviews

[Calissa Knox]

This is a very thought provoking, and beautiful piece of writing. I enjoyed reading this!

[Sierra Erway]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :)

[Calissa Knox]

You're very welcome! It was my pleasure.

[wordman]

there is millions out there,but it sounds it was written for one

[Rob Santana]

Interesting piece of work. I have to agree. I myself keep/hold everything in, therefore, I am the only aware of my thoughts, hahaha. Well written.

[Sierra Erway]

Thankyou very much :)