Me

Sometimes it's like I'm floating

Away

on a melting dream...

Being forgotten

with passing hours.

Annoyance - my only return.

Do i make your life easy?

Am I so difficult to discard?

Why...

Please answer me this...

Would you be better off

if I was gone...?

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so sad to feel this way...caught between "should i stay or should i go" and wondering if the other still wants us ...one of my exes and i went through this phase of ...should we stay together or not...we fought a lot...but still were so connected..it was like what would be worse?
living with each other or without each other.

i like how much is said in a short space here.

jacob

[Sierra Erway]

thank you so much. i am glad you found that kind of deep connection within this piece!

[zainul]

Very good poem.
Love the expression:
"Sometimes it's like I'm floating
Away
on a melting dream..."