Autumn, she is pretty

pitter patter 

soft silent

rubber souls 

skipping cracks

short of breath

cigarettes

concrete steps

whiskey sweats

wet pavement

mossy roofs 

moldy leaves

compost heaps 

power lines

humming trees

humidity

coastal breeze

evening mist

settles in 

summer’s dead

fall instead

Reviews

[celyn]

Concise, beautiful, truthful. You explain so much in so few words. What a wonderful talent to possess. Great poem.

[Sidewalk]

thanks, this is actually about an evening run, but I couldn't figure out how to fit it in, oh well.

[BluesForTheRisingSun]

I really like this poem. I especially like the rhyming scheme, it adds some diversity to the poem in the way that its not a redundant list, nor is it a childish rhyme. Excellent write :)