Wanted to be me

Its how I tackle myself when world is not what it should be like to me.

Wanted  to rise but I dive,

Wanted to live but my mind plays tricks,

Wanted to swim out of the shadow,but I am gripped by malo,

Wanted to lift my spirits and jive but my failures make me cry,

Wanted a brighter side and all I  could see was  a starry night,

I wanted to be one of those,

I wanted to pull my desires close,

I wanted to patch up my rows,

I wanted to forget my foes,

I wanted to side my woes,

I wanted to see my visions happen,

Wanted that someday all wrongs vanish,

For I wanted to be me,

A person I am striving to be.

Author's Note

Hope you guys like it.

Reviews

[Siddhidatri Pande]

Thank you.I will look to it.

[Alyssa Quintana]

I think it is a really great concept! I enjoy the idea that you can struggle yet triumph under the circumstances. There are only two things that I would consider changing. I would use a more powerful word than "cry". Also when you are referring to a starry night as dark it does not make the point I believe you are trying to show. When I think of a starry night I think of bright stars, and I am not so much focused on the dark. Overall it is great, I am not a professional writer, just giving some feedback.