Brilliant Soul

In honor of Valentine's Day - for that special someone...

Sometimes

late at night

when the moon

doth glow

I wonder how

it could be so

that your brilliant

Soul and

shinging Heart

have become so

enmeshed

a part

of me too.

 

For this

I am

truly

thankful

my dear

you are my

one and only

One

that sets the

moon

and raises

the sun.

 

Reviews

[Bear]

Fine write that reminds me of poems inspired while I was gazing up at the Moon that I've penned past, of those I love and always shall.

[poetry-kiddo alienbaba]

SINCERE AND HEARTFELT
respectful and warmth to melt
For the formidable keeper of the sun and the moon.

[Blindfolded]

A very beautiful poem, the love and devotion are obvious here.

[bobby]

I hear this old english accent and choice of words so fitting. Smooth transitions.

[...]

A darling expression of love. Those last lines are so sweet.

[Wolf's Ink]

love the last bits :)

[sherwin]

Nice work, great metaphor at the end.

[Valentine]

Wonderful write and imagery..love does not come along very often..and know it is from God makes it awesome..Kathie

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful confession of love and devotion... that perfect blending of two into one... How I long to find that fulfilment across space and time.

[Derek S.Keck]

Beautiful! Your poetry flows so well, directly from the heart. This poem expresses so much more eligance and meaning with so few words.