'Your Eyes'

If the skies were colored blue

then perhaps I would remember you

because so simply

those are the same

shade of your eyes

I do reclaim.

 

The brilliant azure blue

I see when gazing upon

the caribbean sea-

Yes, now and then

we see once again

you to me.

 

I wander often

into their gaze

a myriad, a mixture

within the perfect maze.

 

 

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem reminds me of the time I sat across a table from a girl with beautiful eyes. I got lost into them...as she babbled incoherently. "Excuse me"..I said, and she repeated herself..."Check mate".
I sat there wondering where the time had gone.

Sweet poem!

[Kyla H]

Simple but beautiful. Well done.

[Siddhartha]

So simple and yet so romantic and profound. A beautiful piece of work.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Love this one :) ... you write so beautifully

[OT]

very nice!! perfect word choice - the second stanza is so peaceful - the view of looking out onto the blue abyss!! great poem!

[reminder]

Beautiful word choice. Very ethereal. Well done!

[Star Bright]

Beautiful! I like the imagery it sends and how it flows. Simple, yet says a lot. (:

[Ladysue]

oh so tender and beautiful...it warmed my heart too...lovely work...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Hypnotizing romance... a tender poem that warms the heart.

[Jim Parson]

This warmed my heart. Beautifully said.