My King

You came to me

tame it seems

with azure eyes

so sublime-

 

Your temperment

was rough at first

but then that quirk

set in

and your truthful grin

came to be known

a sweet melancholy.

 

As things are rough

from time to time

I know this well

it has been mine

yet still we sink

into the swell

of knowing one another

well again.

 

We shall prevail

I know this too

because I love you

you love me too

you are my King

you call me Queen

and together we

can do anything!

 

Reviews

[sherwin]

Easy. Very solid point. But I think I like your pieces that dont have a rhyme scheme more. I dont know why, maybe because you seemed to have challenged yourself more in those poems. My 2 cents.

[Mason]

very sweet. it flows nicely. by the way i love your name!

[Michael X]

wow, sensuous and captivating, I really enjoyed the word play here Sidartha.
You express from the heart of a true romantic, brilliant and subtle :)

[GTVile]

Cute and light, I like it. Its not so lofty and artsy fartsy as a lot of love poems. I think this gets the point across in a more meaningful, tangible way that really improves the quality of your message. Good job.

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[Bubo]

Reminds me so much of my King........when things get rough we pull in, and it is a love that is strong and unique.........delicious and very very romantic.......loved the warmth in your words.