I adore you, always...

Today

you smelled salty sweet

enough to bring me to my knees

it divinely reminded me of

the weekend we spent

at the beach

this weekend past.

 

Today

you tasted salty dear

whispering quietly in my ear

sweet nothings

yet delighted I was

to feel you near and

taste your touch.

 

Today

I heard your salty swarm

beneath my loving arms

I felt you bend to my will

delighted in the thrill

of our coming together as One

you make me feel

Zen complete.

 

Today

you made me feel salty warm

so fine

completely, wholely Sublime

as You to me

became

One again

its never the same

it's never the same, my love without you.

 

I adore you, always...

 

Reviews

[Helen Woodward]

OH how beautiful, being in love like this is the best feeling in the world, "Zen complete" pretty much says it all and your use of salty senses is just gorgeous. I wish everyone could feel this intensity that is overwhelming *sigh* such bliss...such togetherness...such magical power in these words.
Loved it xxx

[Jibey]

The repetition of 'salty' in various combinations worked well to create a kind of incantation of low, and 'salty' has a winningly evocative physical feeling to it. I was particularly struck by the 'salty swarm' - the low murmurings of pleasure in the act of love... Sweet, winning writing

[Emily B]

oh, so sweet . . . and soft and full of love

[Stacey Watts]

Very beautiful piece. I like the calm flow to this extremely romantic poem. Excellent.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

God that is beautiful....your soul is that of an angel...x0x0x0

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh that was so softly sensual... I could feel the warm glow of passion in every single stanza. A gorgeous piece of writing.