Forever

In times of strife

remember your life

is very important

to all those around you.

 

The things you do

what you say

has always

been an uplifting way

to create a smile

on each of us

that loves you.

 

Never forget

no matter what

these times may bring

that each and every one

of us needs you

to be strong

carry along

knowing that this too

shall pass.

 

I love you so

and will support

you through

anything

that dares to put

us asunder

in any way

forever.

 

Reviews

[Liverpoolfan]

Wow. Just wow. This is... excellent. I actually don't know what else I can say really.
ermm... The way the poem is structured is interesting. It's different. It's unique. And the actual content of the poem, the writing. It's... very nice. It's great. Clearly, your a very talented poet. But not only that, you obviously a person that puts alot of thought into their work.

[Helen Woodward]

You are such a caring person, this comes out in every piece of prose you write. I enjoy your work so much for the heart you put into it. This is so true and carries a strong message for all who read it...Your grammar is faultless.

Helen :-)

[Drachke Thoth]

That's love like a rock, Sid. Solid and can't be moved. Just like Bob Seger.
-Drachke

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

you do have words that flow like silk on a beautiful bare back.....you are the most creative and inspiring person i know...you just amaze me girl! x0x00x0x

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Such beautiful words of friendship, encouragement and support. Reading this is very inspiring and gives hope to humanity.

[Justin Tobey]

Great write, Siddartha. :) Sometimes the world is just plain crappy, but it always gets better. Otherwise I don't think any of us would be here still. You made that point beautifully and eloquently.

[An owl on the moon]

Such a beautiful, inspiring write... a true dedication to be there forever... to give and cherish always... What a wonderful write. My heart was lifted!