Come True

>>>>>>>>>>  There is nothing
>>>>>>>>>>  That I long for more
>>>>>>>>>>  Than to be with you
>>>>>>>>>>  For infinity
>>>>>>>>>>   
>>>>>>>>>>  Do those words frighten you?
>>>>>>>>>>  Are you afraid to hear my
>>>>>>>>>>  Hearts true calling?
>>>>>>>>>>   
>>>>>>>>>>  It is so, however, that
>>>>>>>>>>  I long for you every
>>>>>>>>>>  Moment of everyday
>>>>>>>>>>  And every evening
>>>>>>>>>>   
>>>>>>>>>>  To wake in your sweet
>>>>>>>>>>  Embrace every morning
>>>>>>>>>>  And then begin again anew
>>>>>>>>>>  On the following
>>>>>>>>>>   
>>>>>>>>>>  Of every moment that passes.
>>>>>>>>>>   
>>>>>>>>>>  Those without you sting
>>>>>>>>>>  Like the most dangerous of bees
>>>>>>>>>>  Those spent with you
>>>>>>>>>>  Pass before me like the gentlest
>>>>>>>>>>  Summer breeze
>>>>>>>>>>  A dream
>>>>>>>>>>  Come True.

Reviews

[Amberlight]

. . .funny how a unique formatting can bring a fresh and powerful tone to a poem. I had to laugh at a line I read: "Those without you sting Like the most dangerous of bees", I thought you said, "Like the most dangerous of beers", Silly huh?

[Kelley]

this was very romantic Siddartha and I loved the way
you wrote it.

thanks for sharing
Kelley

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

ah.... you are adorable..i love to read your poetry! I love it even more when you speak it to me and whipped cream man! x0x0x ;)

[Fabian G. Franklin]

A very nice piece but what's with all the >>>>>>>>>>>>? I don't get it.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Do those words frighten you?
Are you afraid to hear my
Hearts true calling?

Love can be a scary thing for it has such great emotional risk but has the greatest rewards as well...
another beautiful penning of the greatest gift you can give anyone.

[FuMiko]

Very sweet, but I'd admit that the 'dangerous bees' bit threw me off a little bit.
It feels like the flow is just a little off, but maybe you intended it that way.
A quick fix on a gramatical error, Hearts should be Heart's.