Light Becomes You

Light Becomes You

with the flickering

in your eyes

I see no demise

of that which

brings us together

our gaze met

once again

in the

 

Brightness of

our beings

I see

hope,

peace,

tranquility

in the gentle

knowing

passed

from you to me-

 

Light Becomes You.

 

 

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

in your eyes: the light the heat, in your eyes.
A thousand Churches...
in your eyes.

Very much intimidated really by the amount your words are so followed Sid-Beth who Pierce me so! The lance o light so persuasive in the oriented direction... Home.

An old poem to read its date and so tender still, to your heart. The shape so lovely, I stare before attempting the actual meaning. Only its title and the shape that remind? Ahhh, a form of you, there in an up turn in phrase I dare not read and denies this pleasure that approach... my anticipation. Then...
the tension,
comes

Light Becomes You

yes, yes. I see. Again comes that flicker. That flame.

Brightness of
our being

reflected so close, the shape, the form. That exquisite taste

in the gentle

knowing
passed

no in passing...

our gaze met

our beings

I see
hope,
peace,
tranquility

with the flickering

I see no demise
brings us together

our beings passed

The fullness of that wondrous form felt priorly

in the
knowing

Light Becomes You. In the form the form, the same beauty. In your eyes.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nicely penned, The light of your eye. Well expressed praise to one who is special.

[Celtic Cat]

Oh how lovely!!!! Thank you so much for entering this!! It's completely sublime, and a wonderful tribute! A very enjoyable read. I love the oneness this piece eminates, and the conviction with which it was written. This is a fabulous piece!!! Brava!!!

[The Tao of Bri]

soul soothing...moving... what a perfect poem~ so full of devotion and love so rare in this world.

[R. L. Ambar]

A very tranquil poem, these are the best kind, because although it is short, you can gather so much meaning from it...which equals a great poet.

Well done.

#_#

Rocher

[Michael]

Hi S-

Sorry thinks have been so hectic, I have not done much in the way of reviews. I really like the feel of this one, is has a wonderful flow and tempo to it - pulls you right along!

Well done!