Light Becomes You

Light Becomes You

with the flickering

in your eyes

I see no demise

of that which

brings us together

our gaze met

once again

in the

 

Brightness of

our beings

I see

hope,

peace,

tranquility

in the gentle

knowing

passed

from you to me-

 

Light Becomes You.

 

 

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

in your eyes: the light the heat, in your eyes.
A thousand Churches...
in your eyes.

Very much intimidated really by the amount your words are so followed Sid-Beth who Pierce me so! The lance o light so persuasive in the oriented direction... Home.

An old poem to read its date and so tender still, to your heart. The shape so lovely, I stare before attempting the actual meaning. Only its title and the shape that remind? Ahhh, a form of you, there in an up turn in phrase I dare not read and denies this pleasure that approach... my anticipation. Then...
the tension,
comes

Light Becomes You

yes, yes. I see. Again comes that flicker. That flame.

Brightness of
our being

reflected so close, the shape, the form. That exquisite taste

in the gentle

knowing
passed

no in passing...

our gaze met

our beings

I see
hope,
peace,
tranquility

with the flickering

I see no demise
brings us together

our beings passed

The fullness of that wondrous form felt priorly

in the
knowing

Light Becomes You. In the form the form, the same beauty. In your eyes.

[paul]

love the title... simple and brilliant.
and the lines - in the gentle knowing passed from me to you.
also love the rhythm.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

You are just so well spoken my love! x0

[Ocean Orchid]

A pleasant read of hope & Peace ... with a soft tone yet carries a strong message .. specially here ..

Light Becomes You
with the flickering
in your eyes
I see no demise

well written .

[An owl on the moon]

Such a soft, lilting write that is both warm and bright, washing over us like gentle waves... A deep beauty is expressed through your words that lifts the spirit!

Craig

[Lee E. Powell]

Very nice poem!! I liked this a lot

"Light Becomes You
with the flickering
in your eyes"

This was nice. Now like i said earlier, I really no nothing about poetry but I know what i like and i like this.

[Poeticme]

This is beautiful...a poem everyone can relate to..enjoyed every word!!!...TY for sharing this great write:-)

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

Perfect symmetry and flow my friend........Your words weave a tale of such beauty......Well done indeed.....

:-)

[Emily B]

Brilliant. Glowing. Perfectly executed. It's going right in my favorites.

[Chris Willits]

This is a good poem. Soothing and magical there is an intimacy shown in this poem. An intimacy with life in general. Wonderful!