Lingerie Party

Say

yes, oui, oui

to me and

my ladies

monsieurs.

 

We speak the

language of Love.

 

Plush velvet pillows

and the Goddess

touch.

 

A kiddie pool of

jello

and a magic glove.

 

Tricks of the trade

be our guest

take a load off

in our

lover's nest.

 

Fruit, le vin et

Cuban cigars

L'ete

will tide you

'til L'autumne leaves fall.

 

 

Reviews

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

well now, la purrrrrr very nice Frenchie darling! x0x0x0

[THE LOST ROSE]

This piece Ms. SBP got a standing ovation and I sent out a few read requests to my friends. I love this piece. It was fun and it included such imagery. What a fantasy my mind explored. Great write I am glad we came across each other. I will be back.

[These Haunted Hallways]

LoL!!! Man, wish i was in Old Parie right now lol. I really liked it :) Beautiful, sexy, yet enticing, ooo la la haha ;) Awesome!

B.A.

[Michael]

What a playful little work you have here. The weaving of French just adds to the feel. Makes me want to ask how you spend last Saturday night. You have give us just enough to let the imagination run free.

Well done!

[Edward Carr]

I cannot find anything wrong with this poem. I think it should stay as is. Good write.

[Helen Woodward]

HAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Madame Douchar's house of Jello! This is a lighthearted little piece from you (the serious one) that enables your reader to have a giggle. Your sense of humor shines here...*grins*
Helen :-))))))

[Cardinal Robin]

You have this dainty quasi french woman in you and you write her voice at times...I like this it seems she's quite content...even predatory! Yum Yum Yum come over to my place jello woman! LOL

[Thomas James Martin]

Mais oui, mademoiselle. . .tres delicieux. . .helas trop vieux. . .bonne chance!
Thomas

[WordMaster]

What a whimsical and delightful poem

Imagination unbridled and alive

Well done!