Our Story

There was a girl and a boy

who lived very far from one another

their essences traveled from one side of the world

to the other in waves of elation, delight-

waves faster than the speed of sound,

they traveled though ethereal space and time

into one another's embrace

rising to one another as the Phoenix

as their astral bodies melded into a unity

that physical bodies could not equal-

it was a melding of sweet revelation

where no words needed to be spoken

as a million things were said without speaking a word.

 

They felt transcending, pure, unequivocal, absolute happiness

as they never knew before,

so great, so pure was their happiness

that they were dreadfully scared of spoiling it

in any way, lest it would burst

like a bubble, so they knew not whether they

would ever meet in real life yet they held hope

that one day they might gaze into one another's eyes,

see a vision of each other's souls.

 

They looked forward with barely controlled excitement

to gazing deeply into, tasting one another

perceiving a vision of paradise and escstasy there

which in turn would bring them closer to divinity

a sweet paradise on earth-

they couldn't keep their hands from one another

would kiss, lick, gaze deeply into one another's eyes

all day and night long

as their minds' eyes met as One

they spun into the Universe in electric azure blue

while their simultaneous orgasm lasted for eternity,

filling the entire cosmos with its energy,

its bliss creating supernovas, shooting stars

within space and time while

his ejaculata became the nebulae

her seed became the stars.

 

Together these birthed a new galaxy

amidst the cosmos as their cries of ecstasy

reverberated through the space time continuum

forever and ever joining the infinite

wisdom of the planets and galaxies beyond

as their Love became the Universe

the Universe became Them,

their love gave birth to the Universe

the Universe gave birth to Them

and in the Beginning was the End

in the End was the Beginning.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Sidartha.. this speaks to every readers soul.. of gods and goddesses divine in their own making-
creation being the catalyst for what affection abounds in stars.. the nebuala skies of eternity
i enjoyed the way your passion sends chills through the body..percieving celestial heights.. with ambition
describing the cosmic throes of ecstacy in painted prose.. revealing what becomes of "stardust"

ethereal romance.. your metaphysical projections wisp auras with magical winds.. the way distances
come together when two souls look at the moon simultaniously.. describing desire unbound..
traveling- reaching- enlightening space and time..to what becomes of revelations.. loved this

[forfila]

I love it Siddartha. Its beautiful and has great depth. There is a comp in the Eye of Phoenix group this would be perfect for:):)

Nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very lovely, very beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[JRB]

So they traveled in worlds of astral, much like the dream state in which they awoke in, a reality held in spellbound thoughts of loneliness. Of a love lost, a love found and a love forgotten.

Jan/uisiom

[Ocean Orchid]

A wonderful creation ..... yet so real , vivid and expressed in such a heartfelt manner.More Importantly, this piece adds up to certain realties identical to online relationships .... but overall, very nicely written with tempting metaphors.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Amazing! one of the best poems I have read on this site. So beautifully penned. I tend to like guys who live far away, lol, go figure, so this poem relates to me too.


its bliss creating supernovas, shooting stars

within space and time while

his ejaculata became the nebulae

her seed became the stars.



very descriptive use of human nature and sexuality mixed in with the cosmos. wow, this is a noteworthy and publishable quality piece. word.

kena

[Lee E. Powell]

This is nice, like writing a dream. Very vivid

[Bubo]

I have missed reading your words, delightful, and always fulfilling, i get a delicious sensation as I reach the end, knowing how beautiful the end will be, never am I disappointed when reading you.

their Love became the Universe

the Universe became Them,

their love gave birth to the Universe

the Universe gave birth to Them

and in the Beginning was the End

in the End was the Beginning.

And all lovers must feel this, divine and pure feeling , a feeling of being unique, and always the imagary.Stunning.

[Seriana]

Wow! How beautiful! Utterly mind-blowing creation of words. I don't even know what to say. You've woven a synergistic blend infinity as one, bring everything in existence down to "them". Simply beautiful!

[Poeticme]

This is great!!!!..I really enjoyed reading it....TY so much for sharing....what an imagination you have...great write!!!

[Dani California]

WOW!! Sid, this is so wonderful. To find love in astral projection... what a concept. And your words have made it into such a romantic fairy tale.. I'm completely taken by the thought... the visual.

This is magnficent.. I love the story, and of course your writing is superb! This is going into my favorites..

Thank you!

Peace, Dani