Our Story

There was a girl and a boy

who lived very far from one another

their essences traveled from one side of the world

to the other in waves of elation, delight-

waves faster than the speed of sound,

they traveled though ethereal space and time

into one another's embrace

rising to one another as the Phoenix

as their astral bodies melded into a unity

that physical bodies could not equal-

it was a melding of sweet revelation

where no words needed to be spoken

as a million things were said without speaking a word.

 

They felt transcending, pure, unequivocal, absolute happiness

as they never knew before,

so great, so pure was their happiness

that they were dreadfully scared of spoiling it

in any way, lest it would burst

like a bubble, so they knew not whether they

would ever meet in real life yet they held hope

that one day they might gaze into one another's eyes,

see a vision of each other's souls.

 

They looked forward with barely controlled excitement

to gazing deeply into, tasting one another

perceiving a vision of paradise and escstasy there

which in turn would bring them closer to divinity

a sweet paradise on earth-

they couldn't keep their hands from one another

would kiss, lick, gaze deeply into one another's eyes

all day and night long

as their minds' eyes met as One

they spun into the Universe in electric azure blue

while their simultaneous orgasm lasted for eternity,

filling the entire cosmos with its energy,

its bliss creating supernovas, shooting stars

within space and time while

his ejaculata became the nebulae

her seed became the stars.

 

Together these birthed a new galaxy

amidst the cosmos as their cries of ecstasy

reverberated through the space time continuum

forever and ever joining the infinite

wisdom of the planets and galaxies beyond

as their Love became the Universe

the Universe became Them,

their love gave birth to the Universe

the Universe gave birth to Them

and in the Beginning was the End

in the End was the Beginning.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Sidartha.. this speaks to every readers soul.. of gods and goddesses divine in their own making-
creation being the catalyst for what affection abounds in stars.. the nebuala skies of eternity
i enjoyed the way your passion sends chills through the body..percieving celestial heights.. with ambition
describing the cosmic throes of ecstacy in painted prose.. revealing what becomes of "stardust"

ethereal romance.. your metaphysical projections wisp auras with magical winds.. the way distances
come together when two souls look at the moon simultaniously.. describing desire unbound..
traveling- reaching- enlightening space and time..to what becomes of revelations.. loved this

[Star-Born-Soul]

WOW, You have painted a beautiful story. I want to call it My story but it really is Our Story. It makes me homesick and yearn for what I once knew, what we have both forgotten and what we all want to remember, - a place I call Forever. Thank you for sharing this wonderful composition, I look forward to reading more.

[ATG]

This was very, very interesting. It had some great emotion behind it. It seemed to tell a story at the same time. I enjoyed this. It was well written.

[Coyote]

A wonderful story :)

thankyou for sharing this

Coyote

[Arthur Crow]

This is cosmic ecstasy! You are a visionary... I love people who can see into the stars and beyond.. you have conveyed most beautifully many worlds of emotion and universal landscapes that I hold dear to my own heart. This is an epic spill, the nebula of poetry!

[Rain]

Not exactly a piece you can just gloss over. lol. I especially love the last stanza. Like Gandre, although lacking her intellect, I also study ancient religions and cultures. You are so insightful with this piece. We "are" the Universe. In fact, it is almost like the Universe was created for us, rather than us being created in the Universe. I am reading about parallel Universes now, a fascinating theory that can never be proved or disproved, at least not now. Just a great, and unique piece. Rain..

[Frank Terino]

This is beautiful, descriptive and romantic, and the flows nicely, I really enjoyed reading this poem
keep up the great work.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

they spun into the Universe in electric azure blue

while their simultaneous orgasm lasted for eternity,

filling the entire cosmos with its energy,

its bliss creating supernovas, shooting stars

within space and time while

his ejaculata became the nebulae

her seed became the stars.

I just happen to read this poem again and found the above lines, incrediable and the whole poem breath taken. I have to print his one out and read it ove and over. Very ispiring work. i am so impressed.

[Kiddx]

this is a very amazing write here, i like these lines the best,

Together these birthed a new galaxy
amidst the cosmos as their cries of ecstasy
reverberated through the space time continuum
forever and ever joining the infinite
wisdom of the planets and galaxies beyond

I love the whole story, this is wonderful and very beautiful.

[raining]

how good. i can only surmise and see humility wise that i was able to see the infinate stick end of this poem from where you created it and that is good. you write it seems from a very open place which is hard and easy to do. i am not good at giving vocabulary lessons to another poet so i wont. we all learn and gain from others poems, and i gained alot from this one.

[Bluet_Belle]

I cant even find words for this...

I am speechless, with awe.

I love it!

I beyond love it!