Our Story

There was a girl and a boy

who lived very far from one another

their essences traveled from one side of the world

to the other in waves of elation, delight-

waves faster than the speed of sound,

they traveled though ethereal space and time

into one another's embrace

rising to one another as the Phoenix

as their astral bodies melded into a unity

that physical bodies could not equal-

it was a melding of sweet revelation

where no words needed to be spoken

as a million things were said without speaking a word.

 

They felt transcending, pure, unequivocal, absolute happiness

as they never knew before,

so great, so pure was their happiness

that they were dreadfully scared of spoiling it

in any way, lest it would burst

like a bubble, so they knew not whether they

would ever meet in real life yet they held hope

that one day they might gaze into one another's eyes,

see a vision of each other's souls.

 

They looked forward with barely controlled excitement

to gazing deeply into, tasting one another

perceiving a vision of paradise and escstasy there

which in turn would bring them closer to divinity

a sweet paradise on earth-

they couldn't keep their hands from one another

would kiss, lick, gaze deeply into one another's eyes

all day and night long

as their minds' eyes met as One

they spun into the Universe in electric azure blue

while their simultaneous orgasm lasted for eternity,

filling the entire cosmos with its energy,

its bliss creating supernovas, shooting stars

within space and time while

his ejaculata became the nebulae

her seed became the stars.

 

Together these birthed a new galaxy

amidst the cosmos as their cries of ecstasy

reverberated through the space time continuum

forever and ever joining the infinite

wisdom of the planets and galaxies beyond

as their Love became the Universe

the Universe became Them,

their love gave birth to the Universe

the Universe gave birth to Them

and in the Beginning was the End

in the End was the Beginning.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Sidartha.. this speaks to every readers soul.. of gods and goddesses divine in their own making-
creation being the catalyst for what affection abounds in stars.. the nebuala skies of eternity
i enjoyed the way your passion sends chills through the body..percieving celestial heights.. with ambition
describing the cosmic throes of ecstacy in painted prose.. revealing what becomes of "stardust"

ethereal romance.. your metaphysical projections wisp auras with magical winds.. the way distances
come together when two souls look at the moon simultaniously.. describing desire unbound..
traveling- reaching- enlightening space and time..to what becomes of revelations.. loved this

Cosmic trance, delicate, the words that would play in my head, this poem is quite trippy.

I don't know how else or what else can I say that could come close to this piece.

Good form, good choice of words, good rhythm, well painted imagery, well imparted message.

A signature piece.

[Ken Simm.]

Simply stunning. Just wonderful in content, texture and writing.

[Bear]

Awesome write!!

I'm now a firm believer in "the boy and the girl" creators.
Sallie Bear

[Crazy Cat Man]

a truely tantalizing piece :)

[Justin Tobey]

Beautiful! I love how you combined a love story with a creation story. There are many cultures that actually have creation situations such as this, but you displayed the ancient tale in a new, vibrant way with much more detail and eloquent language. I love the ideas in this poem. Well done!

[Emily Rose]

This is incredibly evocative and passionate - a love poem as I've never read before. The imagery is wonderful and deep and you really carry the emotional love over to the physical and back without either losing any consistency or credit, which is rare. Well done!