Our Story

There was a girl and a boy

who lived very far from one another

their essences traveled from one side of the world

to the other in waves of elation, delight-

waves faster than the speed of sound,

they traveled though ethereal space and time

into one another's embrace

rising to one another as the Phoenix

as their astral bodies melded into a unity

that physical bodies could not equal-

it was a melding of sweet revelation

where no words needed to be spoken

as a million things were said without speaking a word.

 

They felt transcending, pure, unequivocal, absolute happiness

as they never knew before,

so great, so pure was their happiness

that they were dreadfully scared of spoiling it

in any way, lest it would burst

like a bubble, so they knew not whether they

would ever meet in real life yet they held hope

that one day they might gaze into one another's eyes,

see a vision of each other's souls.

 

They looked forward with barely controlled excitement

to gazing deeply into, tasting one another

perceiving a vision of paradise and escstasy there

which in turn would bring them closer to divinity

a sweet paradise on earth-

they couldn't keep their hands from one another

would kiss, lick, gaze deeply into one another's eyes

all day and night long

as their minds' eyes met as One

they spun into the Universe in electric azure blue

while their simultaneous orgasm lasted for eternity,

filling the entire cosmos with its energy,

its bliss creating supernovas, shooting stars

within space and time while

his ejaculata became the nebulae

her seed became the stars.

 

Together these birthed a new galaxy

amidst the cosmos as their cries of ecstasy

reverberated through the space time continuum

forever and ever joining the infinite

wisdom of the planets and galaxies beyond

as their Love became the Universe

the Universe became Them,

their love gave birth to the Universe

the Universe gave birth to Them

and in the Beginning was the End

in the End was the Beginning.

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Sidartha.. this speaks to every readers soul.. of gods and goddesses divine in their own making-
creation being the catalyst for what affection abounds in stars.. the nebuala skies of eternity
i enjoyed the way your passion sends chills through the body..percieving celestial heights.. with ambition
describing the cosmic throes of ecstacy in painted prose.. revealing what becomes of "stardust"

ethereal romance.. your metaphysical projections wisp auras with magical winds.. the way distances
come together when two souls look at the moon simultaniously.. describing desire unbound..
traveling- reaching- enlightening space and time..to what becomes of revelations.. loved this

[Tomás Ó C..]

A tsunami of passion... nice.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Pleasantly renowned and piercingly thought felt. I imagine all readers will relish the fact that you as the writer have taken them on a journey of discovery and self worth. A slight look into the child in every one of us without being to analytical or perverse as sometimes these types of relegations can be, well written and well done.

[Dream Weaver]

Not only did I find this so fascinating but I was
entranced and captivated by it. Very nice work!

[Kyla H]

No words can describe how beautiful this is, simply amazing.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is Epic. The power of love is sacred in your words. You have obliterated the concept of "love"...that is spoken in the sense of an idle word. Amazing work!

[Jibey]

A nice situation, grounded in the cyber-relationships but lifting off into a kind of mythological realm where anything becomes possible... and a New Creation comes from their orgasm...

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This is a beautiful story, love blossums as the rebirth of new life.

[Sean M. Addams]

i liked this alot kind od tells a story and love the whole feel of this..beautiful job on this !!!

[Rory CJ Frankson]

I have no more for today but praise to live here twice as your prose states
+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ truth +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++