In Your Bidding

Divinity

I scream

what is your Master Plan

these dreams

I have

what are they for

I often

wake

laughing

at the words

you say

while I am deep

in slumber

 

Divinity

it seems

you are closer

to me

in those

moments

of ecstasy

than during

the Light of day

 

Divinity

I plead

come closer

to me

whisper

to my soul

so that

I may know

my path

is True

righteous

delighted

in your bidding.

 

 

Reviews

[Michael X]

Sidartha, what I admire about this poem is the word formation, the passionate layout, as each sentence stands alone as a supporting beam creating the structure written in essence to the design, powerfully invented.. the first lines," divinity..I screem"

you have a way of putting emotion in your writing that draws the reader to immediate pondering, to long for awareness, divinity, to seekout destiny's path and follow it, to gain understanding toward the meaning of life, in many ways your words can be

interpreted to personal focus, causing the heart to dwell upon the meaning of dreams and what is life in the bigger picture, beyond the reality that the heart sees in
its waking hour.. what messeges do dreams hold, and what happens when the soul leaves

the body, to search for divinity's hand to lead, touching and portrait devised.
I sincerely enjoyed reading this transending work of craftiness.
Take Care, Mike

Favorite Lines:
Divinity

I scream
what is your Master Plan
these dreams
I have
what are they for
I often
wake
laughing
at the words
you say
while I am deep
in slumber

[Gandré]

This is a wonderful "ask for request earnestly", carefully chosen words they have been. a great way how to make one to stay. The position to be the highest authority in the moment of someone's life is one of the most wanted. wonderful. thanks also for reading my IMPATIENCE / PATIENCE be well...well, I rated 100 % but it doesn't show. However, you know that I always do.