The Threat

The Threat

A Poem by Siddartha Beth Pierce

Why do you care so much about

these monetary values-

cars, houses, possessions collected

for what-to be buried with

these earthly wants?

 

All you need is love and honesty

truth and understanding-

a companion that will sit

by your side through your pain

and suicidal tendencies

of longings to pay each bill

in full

rahter than realizing

that this money trouble

that you have

is not worth

losing your head-

in rants and raves

or to the shotgun shell

as you have often threatened.

 

In the end, it isn't important

it is about worth

not the value in your

wallet or purse

that makes the day

worth living.

 

 

© 2008 Siddartha Beth Pierce


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How true, Siddartha. Material wealth pales in comparrison to love and loyalty. Of course we have to have enough of it to live and maintain a certain degree of comfort, but in the end, it is, well, let me quote the Beatles--"And in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make."
Thanks for sharing your very wise words. Sam


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In debt to our eyeballs is just the American way.
If we wait, till we can afford it, than it's too late, and we don't need it then.

Enjoyed this Sid.
This is a problem many of us face.

Blessings to you,
Rich



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The wealth of material things are so superficial compared to the things that money cannot buy-Love, happiness, peace...it all pales in comparison.

All you need is love and honesty

truth and understanding-

a companion that will sit

by your side through your pain

and suicidal tendencies

of longings to pay each bill

in full

If money were the answer, why are there so many movie stars over dosing on drugs and alcohol? Very thought provoking, Siddartha! I will admit I have had my moments flipping out over money, but haven't done it in a long-long time. Things always work out and we never go without. This is a reminder we all need!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well spoken and the shotgun shell line adds an urgency to the otherwise tranquil message.

God job.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How true, Siddartha. Material wealth pales in comparrison to love and loyalty. Of course we have to have enough of it to live and maintain a certain degree of comfort, but in the end, it is, well, let me quote the Beatles--"And in the end, the love you take is equal to the love you make."
Thanks for sharing your very wise words. Sam


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a truthful write here, Very well said and very well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I whole heartedly agree with you Saddartha, True wealth is not superficial but sentimental I believe.
Nice work:)

Posted 16 Years Ago


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Siddartha Beth Pierce
Siddartha Beth Pierce

Richmond, VA



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