Begging for More

Begging for More

A Poem by Siddartha Beth Pierce

Soul

slings

slender

sly

slow

sweet

salivations.

 

My love

drags

his

wet

carcass

inward

swallows

his

tale

spits

it

out

and

begs

for

more.

 

 

© 2008 Siddartha Beth Pierce


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Dear Siddartha,
I think it's safe to say that with a poem like that, you have us all, begging for more.
Sin-sational!

Antonio




Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

tender
tiny
tinders'
toil
takes
tension's
toll
trounces
toughest
swollen
members,

Love
it
Robin

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn what wow is that all,
i just got knock out by one hell of a write didn't know rather to cum or scream, aaaaaaaahh oooooooooooh please ,please; pleaseeeee give me some more,
i'll be a good boy,i'll be a good boy

peace wizthom

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 22, 2008

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Siddartha Beth Pierce
Siddartha Beth Pierce

Richmond, VA



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