Begging for More
A Poem by
Siddartha Beth Pierce
Soul
slings
slender
sly
slow
sweet
salivations.
My love
drags
his
wet
carcass
inward
swallows
his
tale
spits
it
out
and
begs
for
more.
© 2008 Siddartha Beth Pierce
Reviews
Dear Siddartha,
I think it's safe to say that with a poem like that, you have us all, begging for more.
Sin-sational!
Antonio
Posted 16 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
tender
tiny
tinders'
toil
takes
tension's
toll
trounces
toughest
swollen
members,
Love
it
Robin
Posted 16 Years Ago
tender
tiny
tinders'
toil
takes
tension's
toll
trounces
toughest
swollen
members,
Love
it
Robin
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn what wow is that all,
i just got knock out by one hell of a write didn't know rather to cum or scream, aaaaaaaahh oooooooooooh please ,please; pleaseeeee give me some more,
i'll be a good boy,i'll be a good boy
peace wizthom
Posted 16 Years Ago
damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn what wow is that all,
i just got knock out by one hell of a write didn't know rather to cum or scream, aaaaaaaahh oooooooooooh please ,please; pleaseeeee give me some more,
i'll be a good boy,i'll be a good boy
peace wizthom
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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