The short stanzas work really well to carry your message and thoughts. Refrain of "Wondering when" in those first two blocks works well too. The simplistic style, combined with your imagery, is a good way to not lose the sentiment while keeping the piece original.
Good work.
Thanks for sharing it.
TO BE LOST IN THOUGHT FOR A TRUE POET ,
is to be in touch with ones heart,
after all isn't that the place where true healing and living begins,
life flows on to touch the soul of sweet memories,,here u have shown ,
how one can bring joy inside of tears,,peace wizthom
The short stanzas work really well to carry your message and thoughts. Refrain of "Wondering when" in those first two blocks works well too. The simplistic style, combined with your imagery, is a good way to not lose the sentiment while keeping the piece original.
Good work.
Thanks for sharing it.