Mommy is Here

for debileah, blessings to you...

Wondering when

with pen in hand

I may write you back

into being

 

Wondering when

with chisel bound

I may block you out

of eternal ground

 

The stone you wear

aches my soul

keeping me from you

 

I wish to write you

dig you

sculpt you

back into existence

 

Where I can say

once more

'I love you, dear'

 

And never fear

Mommy is here.

 

 

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

The short stanzas work really well to carry your message and thoughts. Refrain of "Wondering when" in those first two blocks works well too. The simplistic style, combined with your imagery, is a good way to not lose the sentiment while keeping the piece original.
Good work.
Thanks for sharing it.

[wizthom]

TO BE LOST IN THOUGHT FOR A TRUE POET ,
is to be in touch with ones heart,
after all isn't that the place where true healing and living begins,
life flows on to touch the soul of sweet memories,,here u have shown ,
how one can bring joy inside of tears,,peace wizthom

[Hope]

Wow, what a tragedy, such passion and you have portrayed the hope along with the sorrow so harmoniously, great write

[Bill Grimes Jr.]

I feel pain......attempts to heal.......haunting loss.......unconditional Mothers love........and most of all.....passion......

Beautiful journey my cherished friend.

Bill :-)

This is beautifully written! Great poem! Says so much!

[Gavin Keary]

this short poem seems to say so much to me.